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Free verse № 126341

To you

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Jun 2005 · 2 comments

This is to you, the holder of my heart Please dont ever tear it apart. You know I'll always love you, So always love me back. This is to you, my sole inspiration, Always be truthful, give me confirmation. I hope you'll always love me, Because I'll always love you. This is to you, the one I'll always support. This is to the one I truely feel for, the one who helped heal my heart, the one that rebuilt it from scratch. This is to the one that feels for me, As I do for them. The one who makes me smile and mean it. The one who wipes away all my tears, And takes care of all my fears. This is to you, The one deserving of my heart The one I am not afraid to say: "love" to, And the only one I mean it to. This is to you.

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[1] deleted user 6-Jun-05/9:49 AM Reply
This is about loving someone. But WHERE is the love? I don't see it. All I see is the statement of a fact.

'Love, love me do
You know I love you
I'll always be true
So please love me do'...
Lennon/McCartney did in fact a much lousier job, so don't let it get you down, oké?

[n/a] deleted user 6-Jun-05/5:32 PM Reply
Enjoyable...