Re: The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina	elderking 209.79.199.22	21-May-06/7:24 AM
Dovina, This was an unexpected journey down memory lane. Very sweet and nostalgic. It touched me enough to give my Dad a call! Good work.
Re: Birds of Paradise by Domus	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.40.85	21-May-06/10:56 AM
Quite amusing I suppose. Some funny little words inckuded which are quite funny.
Re: Waiting to be Consumed by Alizarin_Crimson	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.40.85	21-May-06/10:56 AM
Wordy but amusing in its own way.
Re: Still Air Sticks by Sunny	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.40.85	21-May-06/10:57 AM
Pules? Pules? You deserve a 6 for that, but the rest is so bad I'll cut it back to a 1/10.
Re: Ode to Yoda by Bazilla	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.40.85	21-May-06/10:58 AM
I assume you are a teenager. How are your spots today?
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.40.85	21-May-06/10:59 AM
Quite imaginative. My sympathy that you have a mentally defective criminal oik for a political leader.
Re: So by Bazilla	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.40.85	21-May-06/11:00 AM
Sod your verruca.
Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove	Dovina 12.72.37.27	21-May-06/12:08 PM
I repeat: "Do you always delete comments before you reply to them?" If you want feedback here, get with the fricking program!!!
Re: Still Air Sticks by Sunny	Dovina 12.72.37.27	21-May-06/12:15 PM
Well, this doesn't deserve a 1, even if does have some problems. I've voted higher that it deserves just to average out Edna, who hasn't a clue. I don't know how she bellowed from morrows, which are future days.
Re: Urinating in the alley by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:37 PM
This is one of the finest things I have read on this site: funny, original, true and (above all) unpleasant. That is what I cherish. You will enjoy my own sublime poetry. 10/10.
Re: San Franscisco by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:40 PM
The standard of limerick-writing here is f*cking abysmal, yet this is not at all bad. Not excellent (see my own wondrous limericks) but good. I would give it 10 except I haven't the faintest idea what "spooge" means. I suppose I could google it but why waste my time? Do you mean splooge? Or spunk?
Re: The balls of Thor by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:42 PM
Not as good as your vulgar poems but literate an interesting. It seems we two are tye most telanted people here so I bid you welcome. Have you tried www.allpoetry.com? You would be a good addition there too. Remember to read all my poems or a fate worse than death may overtake you.
Re: The balls of Thor by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:43 PM
I made a typo in my comment. I meant "talented".
Re: actually chicken and mushroom pies are nice too by cav	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:46 PM
Excellent. I loathe Scotch eggs but like their shape. However on a technical point: they are not testicle shaped (unless your experience with nuts is more limited than mine). Which I doubt. Do try my own tasty bollocky poems.
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:49 PM
Quite OK I suppose.
Re: Portofino by wEdible Underpantsw	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:51 PM
Very fine and wondrous. But a bit bollocky.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:54 PM
Not all that bad. For drivel, it's good.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.123.42	21-May-06/4:55 PM
Fabulous. Fabulous. Fabulously bad.
Re: Tattered by VintageLove08	Sunny 66.69.36.171	21-May-06/5:53 PM
This poem obviously carries much emotion with it...which you can do a lot with. I think you managed to pinpoint a lot of emotion dead-on, if you will, but there were a few things I wanted to point out to you: -L2: "paper cuts"?? -L5: Nice -L10: I didn't understand how malaise could be a friend?? -Last line: I thought you could end with more emotion, more grasp on the heart of your theme, in my personal opinion. ~Sunny
Re: Godproof Hat by Dovina	Sunny 66.69.36.222	21-May-06/6:14 PM
Well done limerick. I think the Buddhiistic choice is a bit of a confusion, to me at least, not speculating you are speaking of Christianity at all due to the low caps, but I still don't know where it came from. I loved the second stanza due to your raw imagery, but I have to say (and I am fully aware you are you might very well be more wise than I in this poetic world, but...) I don't think this well done poem should be composed as a limerick. Free verse. Limericks are for the jolly's. That is not the tone I got from this, just my opinion. Overall, very impressive. Powerful. ~Sunny