regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 146.74.94.65	22-Dec-11/8:29 PM
jeremi...
Re: it is my turn this season by daniella	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:46 AM
Dear Daniella: This is a lovely poem. It is so good I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: Hobo. [The redux revision] by SupremeDreamer	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:47 AM
This poem made me shit with joy and is a lovely piece. It is so good I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: The Final Love by Roisin	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:48 AM
This is a crappy poem. It is so bad I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com ! If you have the guts to do so.
Re: Regterezone: Dosh. by T. Jonathron Remp	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:49 AM
Fucking tripe. This is a piece of shit and is so good I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: You're passionate by EAger to Offend	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:53 AM
Drivel and so pretentious I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: Munnar -a must -see destination by Jessina	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:54 AM
Totally illiterate. You must be a moron or a retard. This is an appalling poem. It is so dreadful I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
regarding some deleted poem...	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:55 AM
Total garbage - This is a worthless poem. It is so dreary I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:58 AM
Genius! Well, no, it's fucking rubbish. This is a skanky poem. It is so good I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: FHjk by Dark Angle	wDaphnew 85.210.6.129	31-Dec-11/8:59 AM
Puerile horsehit and so worthlessw I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: Rimming by wDaphnew	tomycalex 168.235.1.4	3-Jan-12/11:16 AM
Sheer unethical sickening rotton cabbage and rotten egg out here to destroy the purity and uprightness of this site...Please deleate this account and all your vomit smelling stealthy alphabets...!
Re: My Trick-Knee. by <{Baba^Yaga}>	wDaphnew 212.139.234.224	6-Jan-12/8:36 AM
Delightful. Come and join me at http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:20 AM
horse piss.
Re: Let's Grovel For Jesus And Fight The Naughty Satan! by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:22 AM
great stuff
Re: A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:23 AM
fabulous shit.
Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:25 AM
I pissed myself with laughter. Please join my website so we can laugh at your worthless tripe. http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com - come on and join, you cunt.
Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!	wDaphnew 212.139.224.56	8-Jan-12/8:25 AM
total horse manure.
Re: it is my turn this season by daniella	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	26-Mar-12/11:53 PM
i don't think i saw this poem's earlier versions. i like what you did with the imagery, though, much tighter than the lines SD commented on. i'm not sure i understand what you did with the seasons. it looks like the stanzas are fall-summer-spring, is the backward progression of the seasons intentional?
Re: prosepiece by skaskowski	nypoet22 75.74.75.115	28-Mar-12/7:57 PM
i'm assuming this is at least partly autobiographical. it's thought-provoking and sounds genuine, the pro and con of the post-breakup drunk text. the last time i felt like doing that texting was in its infancy and she didn't have a cell phone. when you're in the mood, i'd suggest paring down the adjectives so it hits harder and faster.
Re: Max's Poems by nentwined	Skamper 124.181.76.40	9-Jun-12/4:46 AM
wtf....moronic