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My One Regret (Free verse) by nypoet22
if i'd thought i wouldn't see you again, i would not have stopped at the elevator.
Up the ladder: Climax
Down the ladder: Untitled
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10283
Posted: March 7, 2010 6:52 PM PST; Last modified: April 8, 2012 5:31 AM PDT
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[9] Skamper @ 124.181.76.40 | 9-Jun-12/4:56 AM | Reply
nice ...but..your breaks are off a little...
if i'd thought

i wouldn't see you again

i would not have stopped
at the elevator
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