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My One Regret (Free verse) by nypoet22

if i'd thought i wouldn't see you again, i would not have stopped at the elevator.

Skamper 9-Jun-12/4:56 AM
nice ...but..your breaks are off a little...
if i'd thought

i wouldn't see you again

i would not have stopped
at the elevator




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