I see your mind, his look at me when I fired him. Yes, it's not the same as your hanging him, but I see your mind. Good. Rest in peace.

Fucking rubbish.

Very funny. 0/10.

what is wrong with the first line? should read skies have or sky has...

Shameless advertising for Rockmage??? So your Gandalphs Poetry Agent now?

My fav on this site. I love it.

My fav on this site. I love it.

Are you trying to break a tradition of silence, boycott, abdication or laziness? What is this posting a serious poem on Poemranker. I thought we all agreed that's taboo. 10 just for showing up. And another 10 for a good poem--like two death sentences served simultaneously.

uh. ok

Preposterously self-absorbed.

Is this some sort of shitty attempt at a Haiku? Yes. It is. Labeling it free verse does not hide this fact.

This is not a lyric. It takes me barely more that 30 seconds to sing this. There's no fucking chorus. As free verse I'd be inclined to give this a four. As a "lyric"? 1.

Lunch at Windsor castle equivalent to having ones arse tongued? Makes me wonder what lunch at Windsor actually entails... You're not related to darkie are you?

This could be vastly improved. The title? crap. Weather is barely mentioned, and there is no right or wrong truly in love. All is fair. Feelings have no moral compass. They simple ARE. Have a six.

Wind might refer to the flatulence which escapes your mouth everytime you decide to open it. Yes... I think that is EXACTLY what you mean!! TEN!

Edna SweetAss would be a better name!!

Moi? Tu parle francais com un CON!!! Com un SALOPE!!! FUT TON MERE!

this is why Bukowski hated people

Delightful

Fucking awful.