god'swife
on My Chocolate F-9 by abecedarian
22 Oct 2003, 10:37 AM
'thickness' sanded? How, does thickness sand? 4th stanza- 'everything' or the only thing?
The only thing left
between me and my chocolate f-9
is a month, and then finally
I'll hear her sing.
The unbearable urge to rush
is a disaster, waiting.
So patience for once,
do this right, just for once
as I should.
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
00040400
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
Yes, maybe it was the cheap beer.
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
00744481
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
8074D001
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
O portugese parece pintado fina com espanhol. Ã isto um o nascimento honesto ou um dispositivo? SchlieÃen Sie nie die Ãbersetzung ein.
if eyes deceive how can they reveal? second stanza's fair sort of, nice idea anyway, but it's 'tow' not 'toe'. Mental constructs, interesting. 'Overflowing tearducts', as far from poetry as say, 'bladder infection', or 'compound fracture of the tibula'. then it all just breaks down into Juvenality Deluxe.
More please.
Sounds like you missed a wonderful opportunity to corn hole a corn hole.
That or thinner thighs.
<<Referrer: crystal lane swift>>
nuff said.
I've never done one really. At least as far as the left brain's definition of one goes.
Hmm, well, I think you could probably spend some time rolling this over in your mind to come up with a more creative way of expressing what you feel. The language is just very dry. I get what your saying, and you speak it clearly, but maybe that's your angle.
I saw Slayer in Lon-Don during the summer. Afterwards, I witnessed a young South American man excitedly shaking his friend and shouting about how ace he thought the concert was. That cancels out all the dullards, dunces, posers, buncombes, oldsters, youngsters, hipsters, holsters, s'mores and sega rallys that you may have encountered.
In 1992 the acclaimed director Nicholas Novi presented Placido Domingo with his handmade egg, decorated with a portrait of Peter The Great.
Look, I can see where you're coming from. However, you have to take into account the fact that people can change. If nothing else, Kerry King has sprouted a most venerable beard in the years since the terrible travesties of which you speak, and I think this should be held in his favour. And that is to say nothing of his stately beer-belly.
In some ways I agree; Of course, the members of the orchestral group, Slayer, should never have allowed the young men in question to make unbecoming comments in the vicinity of their roving omnibus. Nonetheless, surely they must still be allowed the rein to express themselves? Are we to ban all art because of this indiscretion? Of course not; freedom to express one's self is paramount in a forward thinking society.
I disparove of the police as well, especially the way they try to prevent crimes. But then that's just one of things you have to try to live with. Life's like that, you know?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
22 Oct 2003, 3:51 PM
DEFINETLY Mraz material. Good job, John. It's easy to see who your inspiration is.
I once knew a person who used to make rubbish .ST3 files on his computer. One of his "tewns" was called "Bored," and then one night he made a remix of it called "Bored 3am." I don't really know why. Anyway, I though this might be of interest to you.
I assume this is the BBC World Service? Do you live in Botswana or something?
love the idea of combonation of Haikus, truly brilliant.