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xxx on some deleted poem 8 Nov 2003, 10:15 PM
I'm awaiting...Where it be? Which office are you seeking? Avoid it at distance I will. Please don't write swill. It's yucky! Be Pucky! OH, my poor beleaguered intellect; I used too many thoughts for these words. 21.7499823511-4
"covered in your blood" this should be "And blood covered gloves."? "Drive it into the heart of mine death closes your eyes But it will not part us from where you lay": This should be: Drive into the heart of mine Let death close your eyes But it will not part us from where we shall rise.
Quite disturbing.. they dont ask for anything else with that? How much do you get paid for that? lol. 9.
Sounds Like a tail from the Dakotas.
baby_d on I'll Take You In My Arms by ilovecars131 8 Nov 2003, 10:30 PM
This is a real touching poem. I really like it. It remids me of something my boyfriend writes to me now and then. I loved it.
SupremeDreamer on take me home by New Life Drug 8 Nov 2003, 11:09 PM
You know what that means? Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
Blessed with 6.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on True Love by Mona Lisa 9 Nov 2003, 4:51 AM
Vaginal and bountiful.
I love how you tease yourself with the thought of you even casting a reflection to judge yourself this shrewdly in the first place.
Is that the equivilant to American expressing away your life to deabth?
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Gypsy by roses are read 9 Nov 2003, 5:02 AM
I bet if it wasn't for your horse you'd have never made it through college?
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Time by NeeMan 9 Nov 2003, 5:03 AM
Try string theory? Then time and gravity seem much less lofty.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on A Voice Found by Blake 9 Nov 2003, 5:05 AM
Congratulations on writing a totally unreadable chunk of junk dungke.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on "On My Love" by Blake 9 Nov 2003, 5:07 AM
You should be beaten with a loaf of stale meatloaf. your poetry is incredibly to contrived with porkchops and applesauce.
Halfed cans can be deadly to late night pipe creating tweaklings. That's for sure.
Like an exploding down pillow against the head of a t-shirted skivied sleep over gal.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on some deleted poem 9 Nov 2003, 5:35 AM
Christian heavy metal saves souls and introduces young couples all at the same time.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on You by h_reach 9 Nov 2003, 5:36 AM
Indubetedly.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Ambition? by TheTiredTyrant 9 Nov 2003, 5:37 AM
Chalk outline of a dead carrot.
Bathos is Greek for going down on Forever at the electorial bath house votathon and Binge sale.