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on Wanting by Samantha
24 Nov 2003, 6:20 AM
Hope u be wanting 2 say no more:o)
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Advertisements is in part a two faced bitch.
Been a long time since id been IN - Sorry guys, busy as a bee & taking 2 much cofee:o)
S3 = Z ? , are you richa?
Hmm Commudus, can you imagine Nero? he would be in Stringfellows permanently.
Wrapped up wel and draped in class
More of a rant than a poem, however I can rant and this for the most part flows like still nudes to the eye. 7
I have to say it's been agres since i last read you and in that time you have evolved in to a good writer with a modern style to drag poetry in to the year of your user name. S2-4 are exquisite. Here's a midas number :-) Happy to see poemranker making reasons for nentwined to be happy that he's creating good poems.
Group hugs everyone
This poem is like a soft porn movie. I want to see these writing talents you have and the love. I want to read your poetic translations of love but where are they? Give me it all I've paid in full and not sneaked in round the back
Dark Angel will sue over this
fucking right- 9
Love the subtlety and comparisons in S2. Line 2 seems to need something as to me it stuttered which served as a weaker link to very strong links. (Just chokes the flow in L2). Your a master at themes and nature and this is a fine addition to your work. 8
Some interesting lines but it's FUBAR in many places, seperate in to stanzas the changes of direction and that will not terrorize the eyes so much. - no vote yet
Poetry for dummies. get a copy soon.
A big box of mumbo-jumbo. If dug into, sorted and organized, a poem can be had. Find more nasty effects of the tea. tea is bad. tea is bad. show me why. don't just say "it eats brain cells" do some research.
Patina - cool word like it
Thes people are fused by self = typo in line
Found this absorbin i/t ! I know i'm looking in to this too deep but the line - high class in to deep atlantic made me think.
High class people are deemed to be shallow, cold water is deep, can you find the antonym?
Other than that it was all hits in the right places and it's a very layered poem - 8 = B+ = :0)
As the song goes. WAR huhh what is it good for?.Coming from a place that altough the natural beauty will enchant most,the sight of a cute little donkey packed with gladiolas,carnations,and exquisite long stemm roses, can mean a donkey bomb/death as you savour your perfectly brewed mountain grown at your favorite cafe Y OLE ! GOOOOL by te guerrilleros. X'cuse my grammar &spelling but in any language.
"upset the calm stillness" is understood,I like your words and truth' amigo."Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity.And Iam not sure about the former.-Albert Einstein.(Tiger grrroowwl) CIAO!
Vas is das und himel, hiden, cruzifix ?.
Und grosse kusse ! well done.
perhaps you can see a "new winged one' at the cathedral of Notre Dame, she will come back speewing some hot tar out of her mouth/fingers I hope. This is not a test...believe me in the real "Jungle" the roarings are spine tingling, and the smell of monkey shit slinging is a nauseating reality, this is a fun arena..really! sighhhh.
This is a song you will humm to all day long, and when he whispers " Baby I'am so Peppermint" you take in a -deep breath..It's a winner. Now I know what Elvis's mom must of smiled and sighed about...not to proud to shout it out. Got to go and make that genius some coffe.. putting on my mad hatter's favorite hat, borrowing the rabbits watch.. and peeking in on the queen of heart's or was it sweet tarts ? lol