Shuushin
on some deleted poem
3 Dec 2003, 7:08 AM
it's fair - I give it a 12.
;o)
Good stuff, K.
oh boo hoo, everyone is picking on me, oh boo hoo. I'm so hurt. HA HA. Dickcheese.
If you took out some of the excessive -so's- it would be so much better. ;-)
MJ IS INNOCENT!
hmm, interesting.
It's ok. I don't know...I just don't like it.
beautiful. I like your style.
hmmm, consciousness I think does not mediate anything.
The information processing, the neurons within the brain attend to stimuli. If attention is sufficient that stimulus is brought into consciousness.
And did you know that bar decay of the brain we never forget anything. It just can become too distantly connected to be retrieved.
Other than that, a clever idea, memory vs memories. Like the half rhyme consciousness and synapse too
'Hmmm I need some inspiration/ want to write a poem/ feeling a bit hungry/ heh hungry for revenge/heh heh heh.'
and they'll have fun fun fun 'til her daddy burns her honda away....
Never heard of them. 7
I really enjoyed how you took me absolutely no where.
Very good, it's a miracle.
Only because, for some reason, that shits not funny. Kids and animals should never be abused.
It's a sign of devilution.
this is good [smiling, slowly backs toward door]
"My dumpling's plumb been plucked, and by a lesser man," - an excellent line.
I much like this - is most excerrent. You pumped this out quickly too, didn't you?
I like this a lot, I don't care why, and I like that too.
I don't mind a fraction of your poetry. Though is says very little for your personality.
eh