Good except for "move on to".

question... why did u put There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive. on one of my poems... i wrote this poem myself.. i looked it up and yes there is a song called Don't Wanna Be Me but its not the same song.. not even close.. i just thought i'd tell you this...

It is not yet spring. Please resubmit this poem on 21st March.

What did you give up? Poety?

Then riddle me this, oh wise one: What is the opposite of mediocre?

yeah, you are indeed in need of deliverence.

I like the illustrations but the technique could use work

Jesus Christ is the only way my friend. He loves me and he loves you too.

the hell are you talking about....your scrotum?

I agree

hey bro, ever heard of grace? God gives Grace to the humble...you cannot become a better man no matter what you do....only God can do that for you. Just goto him and confess all your weaknesses and ask for his glory and love....thats all you need to do

if I beat myself into a delusional state, would I then understand why you wrote this and whatyou expected?

yeah...thats great....BALEATED!!!!!!!!!! 0

interesting....there is hope

Vanilla Sky is the absolute worst movie ever. I have seen films that were trying to be bad which aren't as bad. Referencing that movie in a pretentious wannabe serious poem is, I'm afraid, equivalent to enfolding a moldy piece of stale jerky in a fresh steaming turd.

Quick note - you don't need to put the title in the body as well.

I'm beginning to like the idea of "I love you, so I'll kill you." It reminds me of a few songs by My Chemical Romance. You get an 8.

You are a dumbass... simply a dumbass. You're most likely catholic as well.

Someday, if you practise reeeally hard, you might beat me on a regular basis. (But only if I'm drunk)

You'd probably chuckle if you heard my resolutions. Just wish me luck.