w00tissimo

Very nice

Basic

Not sure about the last one..."poem" one or two? Maybe it's the satire like everyone else said. If it is, I get it and it's funny.

Nice, but don't get why its a "concrete" -10-

opposit...or opposite?

wow, this is excellent. Finally a concrete worthy of its name, thank god for that. Tis a 10!

Very beautiful

Well, there goes my bladder.

I strolled with you..

"My memories, reduced, don't reside at your distaste." - Do you have any idea what this means?

It's a pretty intelligible poem; it just doesn't mean what you say it does. And the title doesn't fit.

I was going to give this a 7 until I read the comments and saw what it is about. For what it's worth, I think you should try the above suggestion and try rewriting it and trying to find the "right" words (I didn't get that it was a mentally ill girl until the comments). Still, it's not bad at all.

Yes, some punctuation would definitely make this better.

"Imperfection is where true beauty lies." A perfect motto for the flaccid-minded, ' artistic' teenaged girl: vague and wishy-washy enough that no definite meaning can be assigned to it, even by the author, but so manifestly absurd that one can show each of the particular possible meanings to be utter buncombe. -10-

I got that Don't worry, be happy song stuck in my head after reading this...

Very good. Only thing I had a problem with was 'Let It Be' ... It just tickled my nerves a little. But thats just me. 0_o;

I found myself singing this poem..

looky, its a arrowhead. What is this creature, and how did its description merit a ten from daveslady? Are you, by any chance, Dave? I can give it a nine I guess, cuz well if its good enough for her...

unusual texture, conveys well.