hillarious for such a solemn subject matter.

funny lot, them religeous

Note: since this is not a haiku in the traditional sense, without natural imagery, its only haiku attribute being the 5-7-5 syllable format, I decided to dub it a "Faiku". In other words: Don't bother telling me this "Haiku" doesn't follow rigid tradition. I am fully fucking aware of the fact.

You are a sad little shithead. A pathetic self promoter. It's absolutely self-defeating to anonymously vote favoribly for yourself, since it shows just how much you, as an insecure twat, seek to boost your esteem through empty illusion. Naturally, of course, your also a strong supporter of the politically correct movement, [PCM- a.k.a: Putrid Cock Mongers.] since you happily zeroed two pieces of mine- one which dealt with golden showers and the other which made use of the word "nigger". In short, sir- or rather should I say Child? You are a dullard who is found wanting. To me, you are the beetle I found crushed beneath my Jesus sandled feet. Good-day. Blessed with zero. [BTW: If it will assuage your puny ego, you can go ahead and zero bomb my whole collection if you like. Just remember to scream in bloody ecstasy "Hail Rockmage!!" each time you click submit with your molested shit-c-licker.]

Had to change the rather long and redundant title... Title still sorta sucks... any ideas anyone? Fuck it with a steel dildo in intellectual anathema.

maybe i tucked you in there i never did look i substituted you for other songs --I think you should cut out the 'I's-: might have tucked you in there.. never did look, substituted you for other songs --- Just a suggestion. I'm just biased against the word I.. that and when it's used repeditivly it rings of anathema going super nova in my rectum. Blessed with an eight.

Btw, a better title would be in order as well...

thanks. i'll work on that on the next.

can''t believe the truth is that fun

Did you write this after listening to radio four? they said something similar the other day.

-Fart- I'm sorry, did your rectal drip return? Or was that mine? I do notice a bit of shit dripping off your Gandalf inspired beard... Ah well, all is lost during a night of heavy alcohol consumption and self-loathing, is it not?

I loev it. And yes I meant to spell love like that... I was writing with an accent.

Oh no fuck head colin has not gone shit face, he has been away you cunt fuckhead wanker of a fuckhead bastard wanker.So bad mouth me you fucking shitface wanking fuckhead, with drivel such as this crap filled fuckfaced excuse for apoem? You have some fucking nerve you fucking wanker.

Oh dear oh dear fuck face no balls eh? well well well, you crap filled fucking excuse for a shit filled fuckhead. Colin has been away, but now hes back. want to insult me more you moronic little fuck face? well? you turd filled scumbag wanking shit face arsehole, with balls to say anything when you think one of the people you have named has left? you fucking wanker, you are an over bred fucking shit with a braun fit for pissing in. Got the message?

Haiku don't tend to have many syllables to play with so I would lose 'you'. As haiku are supposed to have two intersecting images I would say third line should read 'a stone thrown' to seperate it from the turbulent heart fragile body image.

They are pretty godawful these towelheads. -10-

and another thing fuckface, my second name is douglas and so i use the name colin douglas as my name here and everywhere else, got it shit fopr brains, well? fuck head? if you had the bollocks to look up Dr Peter Douglas on the internet, you will find 3 of them. I have no idea which one is the person who came here but hetwo of them have photos. If you are allowed on one of the other sites i belong to you will se my photo wart and fucking all. then look up the othet two. You will see fuckface that they are totally different. Got it? so you don't you or any opf the other fuck heads on this ever call me by another name, got it fuck faced ci=unt of a shitbag excuse for a human being?

Probably. 'who had turned silent in order to achieve the illusion of Zen' amused me though.

and asnother thing you miserable excuse for a wanking sin of a bitch. My second name is douglas, that means i am colin douglas skilton, got it? If you look up as i did on the internet, Dr Peter Douglas, there are three people with the same name. Two of them have photos as i have on poetryshared, look at all three photos and cunt for brains you will see that we are all different so fuckhead where do you get off saying i am two p[oeple? well i'm waiting you fucking wanker. Don't you or any other of the miserable bastards that use this excuse for a poetry site ever bad mouth me again.

The brooding skies/ frowned/ omen. No no no. Overwrought and not in keeping with the tone of the rest of the poem.