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Just silence last here (Other) by Prince of Void
After dawn on shore I was only the man Who stood alone Against myself The best answer That I gave to myself It was silence That silence between me and the ocean My mind moved upon The soundless ocean I couldn’t narrate silence Untold pains never find the sound To break my silence Of what has been lost Between notes Memento of hers Those waves are washing over Everything is lost in this ocean Just silence last here

Up the ladder: Climate Control
Down the ladder: Heartburn

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9213
Posted: July 9, 2007 4:33 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2007 4:33 AM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 69.72.41.126 | 25-Jul-07/5:18 PM | Reply
I don't quite understand it, but I definetly sense the sadness
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