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Just silence last here (Other) by Prince of Void After dawn on shore
I was only the man
Who stood alone
Against myself
The best answer
That I gave to myself
It was silence
That silence between me and the ocean
My mind moved upon
The soundless ocean
I couldnât narrate silence
Untold pains never find the sound
To break my silence
Of what has been lost
Between notes
Memento of hers
Those waves are washing over
Everything is lost in this ocean
Just silence last here
Up the ladder:
Last Night
Down the ladder:
David at the Firing
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Posted: July 9, 2007 4:33 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2007 4:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9263 Comments:
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25-Jul-07/5:18 PM
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I don't quite understand it, but I definetly sense the sadness
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