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Even Santa Takes Trimer-Spa (Triolet) by Stacy Stewart
The snow stopped falling the other day Christmas has come and gone. half the gifts I received I threw away, The snow stopped falling the other day. an advertisement of a new diet pill that comes out in may; santa the spokes model, no longer sings his jolly songs. The snow stopped falling the other day Christmas has come and gone.

Up the ladder: Monsters
Down the ladder: Just Nonsense

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9264
Posted: March 25, 2005 3:27 PM PST; Last modified: March 25, 2005 3:29 PM PST
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