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Even Santa Takes Trimer-Spa

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Mar 2005 · Edited 25 Mar 2005 · 0 comments

The snow stopped falling the other day Christmas has come and gone. half the gifts I received I threw away, The snow stopped falling the other day. an advertisement of a new diet pill that comes out in may; santa the spokes model, no longer sings his jolly songs. The snow stopped falling the other day Christmas has come and gone.

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