4some reason I really cconected with this poem, the reader can have his/her own insight with it - 10

yer good one

Please, I would never dishonor my grandmother with such trite smut. You should be ashamed,"heaven's gate" "ascending" let me tell you something when I watched my grandmother die of lung cancer, and her stinky skeletal form crawled over to me with fifteen morphine patches on her sixty pound frame and no teeth, to tell me some gibberish about her being a bad girl and other hallucinations; I can gurantee to you, you nothing of death, and even less of poetry or life, move. I mean this poem is so fucking contrived it's like a given? t will you or can you ever start to tell us what we couldn't already guess you idiot, in any of your poetry? God, you write poetry from the worst possible fucking angles, what the fuck is wrong with you? You've just succesfully described every grandma in the universe. Congratulations. Way to dig crystal. 5.

"I will fly"!!!! "beside her"? jesus Christ, it's like right when I think you couldn't write anything more fucking 'day 1 poetry' you do? You're like a sure bet, it's amazing. Yes, will you fly? will you cry? will you sigh? oh geeze, Will YOU JUST FUCKING DIE!!!!!!! good god, you're like the energizer bunny of contrived poetry.

Why is this on the best list? You don't even know the difference between "our" and "are"? If you're going to have shit grammar, do it with some imagination could you? liken me does you asshat.

Could have ended stronger. Needs a new last line.

Is this yours, or Lorcas, or both?

One moment can create a lifetime of history or two. Good-10-

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Can you work 'clit' or 'tit' or 'submit' in there someplace? Damn! I'm turning into a white woman-- Michael Jackson.

I grieve for Bi-anca.

Yeah...I'm picking the dustballs off of the monitor. Same party; different place.

What bow'ls

I see so basically you take your shit poetry, and mix it with great poetry, and hope for the best? How inventive.

Now that friend is bow'ls... I mean I've seen some sad shit, but that's the gravy. How's that working for you so far?

Perfect

So lord! It's even worse, it's your translation of Lorca, making it both of yours? My friend that's just plagiary with a dash of brains and a dollop of cross bred boredom.

Well I got to line 2, passed gas, and gave you a 10!

A great way to blend realism and romance. Show what love is about and that's it's still worth searching for. It's pieces like this that keep people like me sane.

You're right. 1. What is this jumble supposed to be?