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on A Dangling Poo by zodiac
29 May 2004, 6:24 PM
I listened to your tunes today.
this more properly goes in the 'metaku' category.
cute, though.
Sweet and quietly stellar.
The most stellar ode about finding out a girl's gay and yelling "you bitch" on poemranker, minus 2.
Not as stellar as the other ones, I'm afraid.
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No. But one should not ramble. Stellar use of exclamation marks, though. As always.
I return your 6.
I couldn't seem to find the flow.
This one I like. good images, and I can almost smell the lilac.10
Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
Yep.
envoke isn't even a word, though i'd like to see your extended commentary
yer like it good poem 9/10
Why?
is not good enough.
No need.
or
Whatt ever the hell it is you say to people when your drunk and they're patronizing you.
Your instincts are great. You're intouch, but as for my own tastes, I keep expecting a nice ginger/sesame salmon with couscous and you keep serving up pot roast, it's good, it's tender, and the potatoes are just right but...
It's really all about me isn't it? Most everything is. The difference, for your writing, between great and good is the difference between eggshell and navajo white.
That last line's a sensation.
Great.
Beer.
Nice ending. Drop magical mystery. It's like sand got into your peanut-butter and jam.
ugh.