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argentina (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
blistered feet stride endlessly to the tune of boredom left alone, and rightfully so i patiently mete out the day without proper introductions thrashing in a silver sea unable to cope with my predicament erring slightly, missing a breath i'm caught between scylla's cacophony and my own whirlpool crawling past the pixellated sand i realize that this land is foreign thorns of a bloodied rose constantly touched by a hematic past but you've got your own troubles to address a triumvirate of political militants causing great unrest disorder seizing your weary shoulder leaving a paralyzed populace in its wake my singular consolation is found in this remarkable steak

Up the ladder: Consumer
Down the ladder: Never Hang Your Head

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11125
Posted: May 27, 2004 12:26 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2004 12:26 PM PDT
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[6] god'swife @ 209.178.136.96 | 27-May-04/5:57 PM | Reply
Like the country you envoke here, your poem needs work, but it's good. Can't get into it now, I'm at work.
[6] god'swife @ 209.178.136.96 | 27-May-04/5:59 PM | Reply
See http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=71485. for my own view on the subject.
[n/a] ThePariahDog @ 68.211.175.138 | 30-May-04/9:08 AM | Reply
envoke isn't even a word, though i'd like to see your extended commentary
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