on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2003, 12:06 PM
So serious. but I guess EIGHTY will do that to a person. Jesus.
on Gifts by miraclemaker
5 Dec 2003, 12:08 PM
What?
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2003, 12:09 PM
Moss should be fucking outlawed from poetry, no, really.
on the universe is throbbing by FreeFormFixation
11 Dec 2003, 9:46 AM
Why would you ruin a great poem by injecting it with politics?
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2003, 10:44 AM
Berrrrt.
on diamond of love by crwncka1
12 Dec 2003, 1:43 AM
You should put that on the special skills section of your resume. You'd freak'em out in management.
on standing still by phbiscuit
11 Dec 2003, 2:19 PM
Once, my toes quivered me a quilt, but then I donated it to Denis QuAIDS. Twice, my toes linted my a dollar, but me spaint it on me Maman.
on Henrietta IV by A. Nomaly
11 Dec 2003, 2:35 PM
"Adoring them" somehow didn't end it for me on the right foot. It's close, but not as close as I know you can get.
on Let Go by PunkyPanda
11 Dec 2003, 2:39 PM
That's about as punk rock as a warm lemonade slurpee.
on Hurt by PunkyPanda
11 Dec 2003, 2:42 PM
I think you should slice open your chest and definitely let all of that guilt out. I mean if you keep it inside any longer it might kill you?
on the universe is throbbing by FreeFormFixation
11 Dec 2003, 3:31 PM
Do you think the united nations is concerned as much about electrons as you are?
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2003, 4:52 PM
I forgot what it was like to vomit on my computer screen after reading one of your various lyrical dumplings.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2003, 4:56 PM
The crossroads are the wrong place to find jesus I'm afraid. But the right place to itch an old scratch.
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2003, 5:20 PM
Ha ha ha... I hope you don't mean me? lol.
on some deleted poem
14 Dec 2003, 5:27 PM
Boy, aint dat the truthe.
on My chair by somemorepoetry
14 Dec 2003, 5:30 PM
Really good.
on Mittens by somemorepoetry
14 Dec 2003, 5:31 PM
Also, really really good. 10
on Eat by somemorepoetry
14 Dec 2003, 5:34 PM
Sounds like some tripe my demented mother would write, but what the fuck it's pretty good.