on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2003, 11:25 PM
Not bad at all.
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2003, 6:05 PM
It never hurts to smile, try it.
on The Birth of an Incubus (Born a child of scorn) by SupremeDreamer
7 Nov 2003, 10:19 PM
You shant speak of our origins fool you'll be our ruin!
on Hurt never dies by hobojo
7 Nov 2003, 10:27 PM
Synoptic? I bet.
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
7 Nov 2003, 11:45 PM
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 1:43 PM
Who are they? And Why should I care? 7. Other than that well written. If by 'they' you meant elders? Or schools in general those days, than all the finer.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 9:19 PM
A very moving and positive piece.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 9:41 PM
Why do you run around giving people tons of tens and tons of zeros without reading their poetry (unless you read twenty to thirty poems a minute, and with some sort of attitude problem. Are you weird? Or just mentally unsound? you do realize you gave me 900 zero's today on purpose? Why and how do you consider yourself an artist to be taken seriously when you behave like that? Your barely an amateur and not even that because you don't even meet the definition to that word. You are a bitter old man with little motive and lots of pointless resentment.
on The Gala Apple by peaceseeker
14 Nov 2003, 10:33 PM
I rather enjoyed this poem.
on Good Riddance by dragonfly
14 Nov 2003, 10:35 PM
Dog killing only counts if you eat it.
on some deleted poem
16 Nov 2003, 4:52 PM
Sex has always rather bored me. Probably, because it's my profession. This does however read well out loud, and that's big tails on my little beasts. 8
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2003, 7:03 PM
"
They seem to relay a calm
A simple peacefulness.
And yet, deep inside
There is also pain,
and something more.
Like she's lived her life in rain." WHAT! Good GOD man! get the fuck away from her she's probably wet! lol.
They seem to relay a calm
A simple peacefulness.
And yet, deep inside
There is also pain,
and something more.
Like she's lived her life in rain." WHAT! Good GOD man! get the fuck away from her she's probably wet! lol.
on Thundershowers and my best friend by NeeMan
24 Nov 2003, 7:01 PM
God cannot keep you from me my love. lol.
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2003, 4:05 PM
An interesting perspective that's for sure.
on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined
2 Dec 2003, 11:21 PM
Simply the best.
on HOW TO BE FUNNY by Lord Ganus
2 Dec 2003, 11:36 PM
This is why you'll go to heaven and hell. 11!
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2003, 11:38 PM
boobies are for boobs.
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2003, 11:39 PM
The last resort to resort towns.