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The Gala Apple (Free verse) by peaceseeker
it was the nights of the dirty south
men who migrated north to represent
in this freezing paradise found
disillusioned by fantasy and hard drugs
here, where women are sisters sharing
iced vodka free from the bartender
with a rim coated in love with sweet sugar
the white rasta man, dreadlocks, deep
impersonated Jamaican accent drawling
smokes out of a Gala apple punctured
through the side sticker to the core
stem picked smeared with cherry chapstick
the eroticized transient panhandling thief
snaps his fingers after shaking hands
puts holes in walls the size of alarm clocks
his threatening stare a sure sign of insanity
all he has left to cling to is his indignant
assertion that he is superior to all of
humankind, everyone except his sister and mother
not realizing that I am his sister and mother
but I met a man superior to the transient thief
among dirty south transplants and rasta men
held his shoulders, kissed his chapsticked lips
as he held out his hand to say goodnight
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2750
Posted: November 14, 2003 10:52 AM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2003 10:53 AM PST
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