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Bach (Free verse) by Rodavlas
As the storm clouds reached the shore
the winds blew deep within the floors.
Rumbles and shakes, rattles and hums.
I ran to the door looking for love.
I ran to the door and found noone.
The clouds drew closer. As I watched
they came upon my door with the sounds of Bach.
The trees bent away from the clouds
as they grew to a size profound.
I saw, in the midst of all the haste
A picture of her with a tender face.
Bluest eyes I could see with serenity and grace.
As I was taken away by the winds, I realized
that I had left without a trace.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 5.4994626
Overall Rank: 2752
Posted: July 10, 2004 6:42 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2004 6:42 PM PDT
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that has to go, really does.