Re: i hate everything about you! by da_bitch |
10-Mar-04/6:30 PM |
I know what you're saying and i know where you're coming from.
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Re: a comment on *-UNTITLED*- by ga_writer |
9-Mar-04/2:29 PM |
i don't get what you're trying to say.. i don't take 12 weeks to write anything. i just write what comes to me. i guess there's always room for improvement
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Re: a comment on *-UNTITLED*- by ga_writer |
9-Mar-04/2:27 PM |
i don't understand what u mean?? i'll take all the help i can get
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Re: a comment on Was it Me?? by ga_writer |
8-Mar-04/6:07 PM |
Thank you for the comment.. how can i revise it. I really want to know.. i'm a beginner.. i just write.. i really never thought about of putting it on the web.. thanx for what u said though!! all help is wanted!! ~NaTe
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Re: Jingoism saved the wingnut by horus8 |
7-Mar-04/10:34 PM |
I DIDN'T EVEN READ IT.. I JUST SAW THE COWBOY AND WAS AMAZED HAHAHAHA!!! thats neat!
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Re: conscience (working title) by hipster flare |
7-Mar-04/10:28 PM |
I like it... but do you answer?? LOL!! Call it the phone call!!! ~Nathan (ga_writer)
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Re: PRAYER OF ECHOES by MEMORIES |
7-Mar-04/10:24 PM |
I like it. Poetry doesn't have to rhyme at all!! I can tell this came from the heart!! a heart that was broken! I gave it a 5 because i wasn't sure if you were killing yourself and i hope you weren't trying to!!!
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Re: In My Minds Eye by daveslady |
7-Mar-04/9:48 PM |
This one is even greater. I'm sorry you lost your mother. This poem shows how much you love her still. You've done a great job of showing how much she has meant to you!!
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Re: To MY Mother by daveslady |
7-Mar-04/9:44 PM |
this is a beautiful peom!! It brought a tear to my eye. Wonderful JOB!!!!!!!
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Re: No Sunday Clothes by wilco |
7-Mar-04/9:32 PM |
HOW WONDERFUL!!! Thats amazing. You have great talent my friend. Great Great work!!!!
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Re: Was it Me?? by ga_writer |
7-Mar-04/8:20 PM |
I wrote this peom when me and my ex-girl-friend broke up. She went one way to college and i went the other way. Enjoy!!! ~Nathan
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