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To MY Mother (Free verse) by daveslady
Today is your day A day where your family shows how much they care And might i be bold enough to say, it just isnt the same without you As i walk down the street the angels cry, which hides the tears falling from my eyes. Flowers in hand, I get to the end of the road and turn right. The houses I pass have people inside and i think to myself: Do they know where im going? For at the end of this road is a beatutiful cemetary where you wait for me. Only God knows why you are there. Mothers Day just isnt the same without you.


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Arithmetic Mean: 8.444445
Weighted score: 6.7222223
Overall Rank: 490
Posted: March 3, 2004 3:26 PM PST; Last modified: March 3, 2004 3:26 PM PST
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[10] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 3-Mar-04/3:28 PM | Reply
Almost made me cry
[6] zodiac @ 152.30.44.208 | 3-Mar-04/4:28 PM | Reply
re "beatutiful cemetary" - if this were intentional, it would be beyond genius.
[10] d35 @ 205.188.208.105 | 4-Mar-04/6:08 PM | Reply
nice kid
[10] deleted user @ 63.229.135.44 | 4-Mar-04/10:39 PM | Reply
WOW! Powerful!
[10] ga_writer @ 162.40.239.14 | 7-Mar-04/9:44 PM | Reply
this is a beautiful peom!! It brought a tear to my eye. Wonderful JOB!!!!!!!
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