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Free verse № 93335

To MY Mother

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Mar 2004 · 5 comments

Today is your day A day where your family shows how much they care And might i be bold enough to say, it just isnt the same without you As i walk down the street the angels cry, which hides the tears falling from my eyes. Flowers in hand, I get to the end of the road and turn right. The houses I pass have people inside and i think to myself: Do they know where im going? For at the end of this road is a beatutiful cemetary where you wait for me. Only God knows why you are there. Mothers Day just isnt the same without you.

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5 comments

[10] wilco 3-Mar-04/3:28 PM Reply
Almost made me cry
[6] zodiac 3-Mar-04/4:28 PM Reply
re "beatutiful cemetary" - if this were intentional, it would be beyond genius.
[10] d35 4-Mar-04/6:08 PM Reply
nice kid
[10] deleted user 4-Mar-04/10:39 PM Reply
WOW! Powerful!
[10] ga_writer 7-Mar-04/9:44 PM Reply
this is a beautiful peom!! It brought a tear to my eye. Wonderful JOB!!!!!!!