Re: black dog by wilco	6-Feb-05/12:28 PM
poor little dog. Good poem.
Re: An Even Better God by wilco	3-Jan-05/8:15 PM
very good my friend. sad but true isn't it?
Re: A Girl’s Climax by Dovina	13-Jul-04/11:36 AM
I love the poem but isn't it sad what people put them selves through just to get noticed by others? Why can't we just be our selves and still get noticed? The one that notices you then will truely appreciate who you are compared to the one who notices you for the mask that you put on.
Re: a comment on Heaven Out Here by wilco	3-Jun-04/11:41 AM
E- First off, learn how to spell and proof read your work before submitting it and second, did you not read the poem all the way through? If you did you would have known that it wasn't about heaven being "sitting around getting tan with a beer" it was about the surrounding that God has created and how wonderful it is to enjoy them. Think about it. To enjoy the outdoors and God'd creation is "shallow"?
Re: The Tony Blair Which Project by wilco	18-May-04/6:29 PM
again, I got the inside scoop and now understand the meaning behind the words. Great stuff
Re: Kept by <{Baba^Yaga}>	11-May-04/5:10 PM
love that last line. many women try to embark on that adventure and often fail, as they very well should.
Re: Lover by daveslady	11-May-04/5:07 PM
wonderful ? B. Dave is my Fiance of 4 1/2 years. It has peeked my interest as to why my user name has sparked such an interest but nonetheless its my name among friends as well. well, its really daves woman but i dont particularly care for that one. this name was just the first thing i thought of when choosing a user anme for the website.
Re: Daddy's Little Girl by daveslady	11-May-04/5:01 PM
good ? from poetandknowit. I'm often called dave's woman by him and his friends when I call or go to his house. So, when i signed up to this website it was an easy title for me to use. The simplest one that came to mind first. I, however, know that I am not property and refuse to be treated as such. This tile is more of a joke among friends rather than a tile. But thank you for your concern and if i knew of a way to change my name without loosing the scores and comments I may have very well thought about doing so.
Re: Lover by daveslady	10-May-04/8:44 PM
Zodiac, thanks for the comments. I wrote this a while ago while Dave and I were doing really well and I missed him vey much. Since then...well, everything has changed. Might need to write a new poem to explain it all. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts and believe me Ive thought it over a bunch.
Re: Insomnia by wilco	10-May-04/8:37 PM
wow
Re: Lover by daveslady	9-May-04/8:12 PM
I just thought every one should know that, yes this poem is about Dave, and yes, its about my first day at school- tranfered colleges and had to leave him behind.
Re: I Love You by jude	28-Apr-04/3:41 PM
Ive been there before, funny how things that we think will never change seem to change the most
Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco	18-Apr-04/11:17 PM
no words. cryin
Re: Jesus Rises from the Grove by wilco	9-Apr-04/9:55 PM
very visual, liked the twist at the end
Re: Diary by wilco	6-Apr-04/12:09 AM
saw the original typed way, very cool man. The poem is a great to think about things
Re: My Day Off by wilco	15-Mar-04/4:27 PM
I absolutely loved it the best happy poem ive read
Re: Hope, Approximately by wilco	10-Mar-04/7:51 PM
10 only 'cause i know the story behind it. Great job at showing your true colors
Re: Yellow! by AuntyM	5-Mar-04/2:46 PM
very true! made me laugh
Re: waking up to fucking reality by d35	4-Mar-04/10:17 PM
no words to describe how I feel. Thanks for sharing
Re: An Infection in the Brain by GregDeEgg	4-Mar-04/10:08 PM
its a wonder how you could so correctly write out the first thoughts of a woman when she finds out that she is with child. great