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An Infection in the Brain (Free verse) by GregDeEgg
A question is an infection in the brain That asks of itself, “What good am I?” “Thou art good,” responds the brain, who loved the summer for bites from mosquitoes -- Loved their itch like a mother loves her baby. Or, not her baby, as it turns out, but her womb when infected with the baby; the unquenchable itch, like the burn of the sun’s rays on those same summer days, in those same silly ways that the same selfull question keeps emerging and infecting -- emerging and infecting, like a bump of dying skin; still mindful of its ways.

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Overall Rank: 8641
Posted: March 4, 2004 9:56 PM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2004 9:56 PM PST
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[7] daveslady @ 140.211.124.224 | 4-Mar-04/10:08 PM | Reply
its a wonder how you could so correctly write out the first thoughts of a woman when she finds out that she is with child. great
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