Re: Yellow! by AuntyM |
5-Mar-04/2:46 PM |
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5-Mar-04/3:42 PM |
lovin it, wouldn't mind hearin more on the topic. Hate the man myself. I realise that hate is a strong word but, we are talking about a man who goes to war for oil. If we could only put that much effort and $ into helping those who really need it. YES I remember 9-11, I also have close ties with Iraq so I kinda know how they feel about the situation.
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Re: Hope, Approximately by wilco |
10-Mar-04/7:51 PM |
10 only 'cause i know the story behind it. Great job at showing your true colors
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Re: My Day Off by wilco |
15-Mar-04/4:27 PM |
I absolutely loved it
the best happy poem ive read
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Re: Diary by wilco |
6-Apr-04/12:09 AM |
saw the original typed way, very cool man. The poem is a great to think about things
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Re: Jesus Rises from the Grove by wilco |
9-Apr-04/9:55 PM |
very visual, liked the twist at the end
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Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco |
18-Apr-04/11:17 PM |
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Re: I Love You by jude |
28-Apr-04/3:41 PM |
Ive been there before, funny how things that we think will never change seem to change the most
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28-Apr-04/3:58 PM |
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8-May-04/9:08 PM |
very well put. if its true, I'm very sorry to hear that, but if not you did a great job at putting emotion behind it that wasnt really there.
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Re: Lover by daveslady |
9-May-04/8:12 PM |
I just thought every one should know that, yes this poem is about Dave, and yes, its about my first day at school- tranfered colleges and had to leave him behind.
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Re: Insomnia by wilco |
10-May-04/8:37 PM |
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Re: Lover by daveslady |
10-May-04/8:44 PM |
Zodiac, thanks for the comments. I wrote this a while ago while Dave and I were doing really well and I missed him vey much. Since then...well, everything has changed. Might need to write a new poem to explain it all. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts and believe me Ive thought it over a bunch.
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl by daveslady |
11-May-04/5:01 PM |
good ? from poetandknowit. I'm often called dave's woman by him and his friends when I call or go to his house. So, when i signed up to this website it was an easy title for me to use. The simplest one that came to mind first. I, however, know that I am not property and refuse to be treated as such. This tile is more of a joke among friends rather than a tile. But thank you for your concern and if i knew of a way to change my name without loosing the scores and comments I may have very well thought about doing so.
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Re: Lover by daveslady |
11-May-04/5:07 PM |
wonderful ? B. Dave is my Fiance of 4 1/2 years. It has peeked my interest as to why my user name has sparked such an interest but nonetheless its my name among friends as well. well, its really daves woman but i dont particularly care for that one. this name was just the first thing i thought of when choosing a user anme for the website.
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Re: Kept by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-May-04/5:10 PM |
love that last line. many women try to embark on that adventure and often fail, as they very well should.
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Re: The Tony Blair Which Project by wilco |
18-May-04/6:29 PM |
again, I got the inside scoop and now understand the meaning behind the words. Great stuff
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Re: A Girlâs Climax by Dovina |
13-Jul-04/11:36 AM |
I love the poem but isn't it sad what people put them selves through just to get noticed by others? Why can't we just be our selves and still get noticed? The one that notices you then will truely appreciate who you are compared to the one who notices you for the mask that you put on.
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Re: An Even Better God by wilco |
3-Jan-05/8:15 PM |
very good my friend. sad but true isn't it?
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Re: black dog by wilco |
6-Feb-05/12:28 PM |
poor little dog. Good poem.
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