| Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover |
29-Aug-02/11:12 PM |
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I am not following you. I am reading the comments. And clicking. Procrastinating job...and okay it is pretty brillant!!!!
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| Re: the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o |
29-Aug-02/10:58 PM |
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Wow, look at that form!! Brillant poem!!
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| Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover |
29-Aug-02/10:56 PM |
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It is not pretty. It is brillant!!!! and God's Wife is on vacation!
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| Re: A Love in the Distance by kristenk69lover |
29-Aug-02/10:34 PM |
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I love you too, Baby. Why is baby a proper noun, though? Is there someone else? Who will stick up for you when I am gone. This is true art. I am hanging it on my wall.
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| Re: 'The Grey' Triplet by Shin-Bojangles |
29-Aug-02/10:32 PM |
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Oh god, another clever ditty. I went to the star trek convention here in misery and I met that robot and you know what--he was not a robot after all. It killed me to find out that everything i thought was real on TV was just made up. Well at least I have these conventions and david eddings and the hobbit and oh, yes, lovecraft--go go, Cthulhu, go.
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| Re: Uncertainty by nentwined |
29-Aug-02/10:18 PM |
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This has come up four times in the last six entries. What is so random about that? It is a communist plot!!
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| Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover |
29-Aug-02/10:15 PM |
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I feel you honey.... I fell the loss...the leave...fall..ing...i am..afraid.. of ;;; falling--- asleep000before... i fin--ish ..the first ..line. Absoulte brillance. More, please, more....
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| Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover |
29-Aug-02/10:12 PM |
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Fucking brilliant!!!! Mega 10.
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| Re: Plugged Up Nose by PK |
29-Aug-02/10:10 PM |
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See Ming Merciless, whose attempt also sucks, to see exactly how clever this poem is not. Everybody with a Gallagher sense of humor is doing it.
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| Re: Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles |
29-Aug-02/10:08 PM |
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I never said anything about the theme. I was merely analyzing the merits of a LIMERICK that was making an attempt at humor. Besides the poets peeps and, of course, the razorgirl, and maybe even Bachus, if his mother watching Letterman and he has had a few would find this the least bit interesting.
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| Re: Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles |
29-Aug-02/9:32 PM |
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| Re: Thousand Tears by kristenk69lover |
29-Aug-02/8:51 PM |
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"Do you hear me/Do you care?" I could not finish this poem, sorry. But it is pure genius. Pure genius.
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
29-Aug-02/8:43 PM |
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Oh fuck, another newbie, here we go again.
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| Re: The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram |
29-Aug-02/6:57 PM |
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Excuse me for my ignorance of scot pigeon but what the hell is a scratcher?
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| Re: Comparisons by anagram |
29-Aug-02/6:40 PM |
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I am sorry to hear that anagram, I really am. I have a lot to say on the subject, but am just finding ways to say it. Wish him a few more pub quizzes and many more frothy pints.
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| Re: Comparisons by anagram |
29-Aug-02/5:54 PM |
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Pub quizzes, you like pub quizzes. I???m coming over and we are going out tonight. I ???am the greatest??? at pub quizzes. Fuck poetry, fuck the 14 year old angst, I???m going drinking with the anagram.
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| Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit |
29-Aug-02/4:18 PM |
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Some thirteen people (babies and elderly) have died from it (that is equal to 5000 per one in developing countries). It is an epidemic!! And horses, many, many horses have perished. The stock shows will have to postpone until the ponies grow!!! Don't you like horses, D.A.? Don't you?
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| Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit |
29-Aug-02/4:10 PM |
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| Re: Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles |
29-Aug-02/3:46 PM |
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I have seem many LIMERICKS, as you like to refer to them as, posted on this site which made me guffaw with pleasure, unfortunately this was child's play. I did not laugh, I did not cry I just sat there and wondered why his girly thinks it classic when it is nothing more than shite.
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| Re: no pretty words by silvertongueddevil |
28-Aug-02/10:36 PM |
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I do not necessarily like the first stanza, but I like the poem. good stuff.
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