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Plugged Up Nose (Free verse) by PK Sniffle, Sniffle
cannot breathe
Sniffle, Sniffle
gone too far
The air is gone
My noise is plugged
I'm gasping for air
That's just not there
Sniffle, Sniffle
Blow your nose
Sniffle, Sniffle
Snot flies everywheres
Up the ladder:
Isolation
Down the ladder:
not the miscellany
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Posted: August 29, 2002 8:56 PM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2002 8:56 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.59471 Overall Rank: 12560 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.178
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29-Aug-02/10:10 PM
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See Ming Merciless, whose attempt also sucks, to see exactly how clever this poem is not. Everybody with a Gallagher sense of humor is doing it.
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