Re: a comment on Fall from Love's Grace by loneshadow29	1-Oct-02/10:01 AM
I tell him this every day. Maybe he will listen to a mother figure.
Re: a comment on At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness	30-Sep-02/3:46 PM
Sitting at DIA with a flight delay and now I am totally turned on. I bet you could kick my ass.
Re: a comment on At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness	30-Sep-02/2:36 PM
What, you use a motor to get up them there humps in Virginia. And here I thought you were the spawn of John Tomac. Geez. What is the use of CPR.
Re: a comment on A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle	30-Sep-02/1:58 PM
I think maybe a 7 at best. He sure had his annoying moments.
Re: the room's a'spinnin' by nentwined	30-Sep-02/12:07 PM
huh.
Re: a comment on At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness	30-Sep-02/12:00 PM
I never said it sucked, I said it flops. And you better not be drinking and driving. It is against the law.
Re: At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness	30-Sep-02/11:55 AM
"The air is cool, the sun is hot, In between seasons, and time's forgot" I do not like this, no I do not, I do not like this I think it flops. I guess I want more from the ending. If it was as good as the first stanza, you would have it. I am not going to vote until you quit stopping off at the bar before coming home.
Re: Parallel by aperfecttool77	30-Sep-02/11:37 AM
You have littered the recent list with your work. At least it reveals you revise and that will be important for this poem/lyric.
Re: a comment on Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky	30-Sep-02/11:29 AM
Look, I don't feel like arguing with idiots who think they are writers today. You "told" me too much and forgot to show me really much of anything. It is a top five rule in creative writing, especially poetry. Show, don't tell. And in an attempt at a clever ditty, it is all the more important. You left nothing to the reader. And you are welcome for the 3, I thought I was being kind. I will give it more thought next time.
Re: Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky	30-Sep-02/8:53 AM
Told me to much. Good thought, but it is not communicated effectively.
Re: A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle	30-Sep-02/8:48 AM
Take a picture. thank you ever so much for wasting my time on this good day september 30, 2002. Take out the donut whole and really what do you have? a zero.
Re: a comment on Witch to Wicca by Lenore	27-Sep-02/9:14 PM
They are nuts with the candles or whatever they have burning. I think she mixes all sorts of religions: do the wiccans cut themselves (not like scarification or anything) but like a prick or something to offer blood during a certain time of the month. Does this have to do with menstruation? I feel terrible I usually remember everything, but when she starts going on I tune into other channels in my head.
Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn	27-Sep-02/8:35 PM
This poem is horrible!!!!
Re: a comment on Witch to Wicca by Lenore	27-Sep-02/8:10 PM
I have a wiccan friend and I think she is nuts! I swear she is going to burn her house down! But I suppose that is the realist in me.
Re: a comment on Witch to Wicca by Lenore	27-Sep-02/6:56 PM
Now Frass, why would you say something like that? I was giving this poem a compliment. Why is it you have to comment on my comments instead of coming up with your own thoughts? And what ever happened to the machismo of the mountain bike that was going to resituate me at the top of a Virginia anthill? Although I must say the 24hours of Snowshoe is quite the challenge. And I challenged you to write of love poem and you never replied. Are you a pansy?
Re: A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom	27-Sep-02/2:36 PM
But it is not really coming across as satire like a few of your other poems and therefore, in my opinion, it comes out as being straightforward, which, in my opinion, makes it sound ridiculous rather than humorous, which is possibly your intended meaning. In a situation like this you go almost use the tactic of crossing the line with humour which would force people to be disgusted and stunned, but force laughter as a nervous response. I do not know, you are the psychologist; you should really know how to manipulate a good yarn. As far as the actual recourse, I agree, but again I think it lies in the current policy that is before congress and most of the agenda is being puppeted through Bush by DICK. This is all his policy. He was spouting "pre-emptive" way back when. Invading Iraq is only a first step. Did you read the policy? It seems we no longer respect the concept of sovereignty considering we will no longer allow any other country to compete with us as a military super power. So does this mean pre-emptive strikes are in the future toward China?
Re: The Drive In (Drugs broke her, she broke me) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	27-Sep-02/2:27 PM
Yo, Baba, as they say, "break a leg" tomorrow night! PK
Re: a comment on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit	27-Sep-02/2:14 PM
AMALEA: I was not being nasty. I was saying I'm sorry. I am reaaly not z or balth! I promise. Come back, please come back.
Re: Witch to Wicca by Lenore	27-Sep-02/1:43 PM
Okay, now, let's all skyclad and cloubburst, hurrah!!
Re: down by siberian	27-Sep-02/1:32 PM
This is poemranker, not high school, we don't have to double space here. I am sad after reading this, truly sad.