Re: just another punk song by darby pyn	4-Dec-02/9:12 AM
In this effort are you confusing punk song with say, hardcore song (you youngsters always seem to confuse the two),? Based on the words etched in blue I would vote the latter. If so, are you suggesting, or at least inferring by the chosen title, that all of these songs song alike or are attempting to affect the listener the same way?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-02/9:43 AM
This defeats any sort of thing I can say about it. I give it high marks for lack of slash upon entrance into water!
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-02/10:06 AM
Is this about god?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-02/10:40 AM
A poem that starts well and s l o w ly poops. But I suppose that is the point. But could not that point be made with out dipping, say, in the toilet?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-02/10:51 AM
On another note: what happend the the hardcore be-bop, I'm-a-hardcore-cut-you-up-gangsta-london-boy. It read much better than this junk.
Re: one word by Blade	4-Dec-02/11:55 AM
How long did this take to write? And exactly what are you shooting for? Reaction? Abstraction? Realism? Surrealism? Warholism? Gymnasium? Is this the individual proletariats response to oppression in the work place? A response to a bar rejection? A failing grade? What do you mean. Do you want to start a revolution? Or are you just a young boy with nothing better to do and loads suburban angst?
Re: idiots by w~* ATHENA *~w	6-Dec-02/8:47 AM
Do you ever write anything yourself or have you simply developed a keen ability to cut and paste.
Re: Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z	6-Dec-02/8:53 PM
Thank you ever so much for making this the ninth poem written in honor of my work here. I believe that officially takes the cake. It is amazing the depths one will sink to show the lack of integrity.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/9:49 PM
I cannot say I care for this one much.
Re: Sense of drpression by Sugarbbybuttrfly	6-Dec-02/9:51 PM
What does "cuz" mean? Pimple poem.
Re: Like a Father by confuzdlilgirl	6-Dec-02/9:56 PM
Is this person in jail?
Re: The way they used to be by Sugarbbybuttrfly	6-Dec-02/9:59 PM
Pimple poem deluxe.
Re: The generosity of others. by darby pyn	6-Dec-02/10:04 PM
Obviously just another punk song.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/10:07 PM
I get lost in all the useless language. Adjectives and adverbs everywhere.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/10:08 PM
Write me a love poem dickhead.
Re: Playing Games by ThoughtfulSoul	6-Dec-02/10:11 PM
Pimple poem with fries.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/10:24 PM
I see Settle has been at it again. DA will you blow him already.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/10:26 PM
What is a smurf?
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Dec-02/11:07 PM
I really like "chaste to be chased", but I think you should change the title of the poem to "Holy Shit Batman!! Look at these adjectives."
Re: Hunt <3 by Plasticgirlwithgun	6-Dec-02/11:30 PM
What does less than 3 mean? Is that like 1 or 2? Oh, I see, it is about sleeping with less than three guys and really wanting to just sleep with one but being secretly afraid of the responsilbilities of commitment? Am I in the neighborhood? This is deep, black head stuff!!!