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Playing Games (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul Hate to be fooled but it's just a game.
Thought I was free but it's just a game.
Damn!! Life is not in my favor, because
I thought life was just for real.
They tell me that life is not a game
but someone is always tallying the points.
Wish someone would have told me it was just a game
because maybe then I would have been trying to win
Up the ladder:
The Heart Of It
Down the ladder:
Yesterday and Today
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Posted: October 21, 2002 6:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2002 8:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.3333335 Overall Rank: 13078 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 207.179.183.160
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21-Oct-02/6:52 PM
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'Tallying' the points, I assume. And it should be 'would HAVE told me'. Sorry. I'm a pedant.
'Tis wonderful indeed. A very interesting look on life. Alwasy try is the message here. Very good.
Pimple poem with fries.
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