poemranker ::Playing Games by ThoughtfulSoul

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Playing Games

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Oct 2002 · Edited 21 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

Hate to be fooled but it's just a game. Thought I was free but it's just a game. Damn!! Life is not in my favor, because I thought life was just for real. They tell me that life is not a game but someone is always tallying the points. Wish someone would have told me it was just a game because maybe then I would have been trying to win

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3 comments

[3] Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/6:52 PM Reply
'Tallying' the points, I assume. And it should be 'would HAVE told me'. Sorry. I'm a pedant.
[8] cleverdevice 22-Oct-02/2:41 AM Reply
'Tis wonderful indeed. A very interesting look on life. Alwasy try is the message here. Very good.
[0] poetandknowit 6-Dec-02/10:11 PM Reply
Pimple poem with fries.