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Playing Games (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

Hate to be fooled but it's just a game. Thought I was free but it's just a game. Damn!! Life is not in my favor, because I thought life was just for real. They tell me that life is not a game but someone is always tallying the points. Wish someone would have told me it was just a game because maybe then I would have been trying to win

Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/6:52 PM
'Tallying' the points, I assume. And it should be 'would HAVE told me'. Sorry. I'm a pedant.




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