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The Heart Of It (Free verse) by raysaun
Deep, dark, rich brown soil; fertile, waiting, responsive. Seeds dropped randomly with caring hands, with loving heart and eyes that see the beauty that God???s own earth can hold. Birds and insects, butterflies and bees, all contribute to create such art: leaf to mould to mulch and then it all becomes rich dark soil again.

Up the ladder: The Politics of Fashion
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.3333335
Overall Rank: 13076
Posted: July 7, 2002 9:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2002 9:30 AM PDT
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[4] deleted user @ 24.199.93.49 | 15-Jul-02/9:33 AM | Reply
Like this one because of the caring hands; don't like the birds and insects, butterflies and bees. Could be good.
[9] Holden @ 195.92.67.76 | 23-Jul-02/11:02 AM | Reply
Very Metaphoric and Inspired.
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