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The Heart Of It (Free verse) by raysaun

Deep, dark, rich brown soil; fertile, waiting, responsive. Seeds dropped randomly with caring hands, with loving heart and eyes that see the beauty that God???s own earth can hold. Birds and insects, butterflies and bees, all contribute to create such art: leaf to mould to mulch and then it all becomes rich dark soil again.

cyberian54 15-Jul-02/9:33 AM
Like this one because of the caring hands; don't like the birds and insects, butterflies and bees. Could be good.




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