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Like a Father (Free verse) by confuzdlilgirl
I met you when I was little A childish girl in your eyes Always having something to fiddle Every day a new thing realized Well I'm still that little girl Though I keep her hidden inside I still get lost in my own world this you see, though I try to hide You tell me not to care Or what other people see because I'm good and I'm fair and that's all I have to be You tell me I'm all right You hold me when I need you You keep me safe at night to me you're always true I don't need someone to say that you are too good I know you have a special way that many wish they could You tell me that I'm pretty and ask me of my view of boys there are many all of which I tell you you listen when I share something I keep hidden it matters if I'm not there you see what I am within You see me growing to be Yet see the little girl inside And like a father to me You'll be right by my side.

Up the ladder: Do you
Down the ladder: The way they used to be

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12619
Posted: December 2, 2002 4:41 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 12:17 PM PST
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[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.123 | 6-Dec-02/9:56 PM | Reply
Is this person in jail?
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