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Like a Father (Free verse) by confuzdlilgirl
I met you when I was little
A childish girl in your eyes
Always having something to fiddle
Every day a new thing realized
Well I'm still that little girl
Though I keep her hidden inside
I still get lost in my own world
this you see, though I try to hide
You tell me not to care
Or what other people see
because I'm good and I'm fair
and that's all I have to be
You tell me I'm all right
You hold me when I need you
You keep me safe at night
to me you're always true
I don't need someone to say
that you are too good
I know you have a special way
that many wish they could
You tell me that I'm pretty
and ask me of my view
of boys there are many
all of which I tell you
you listen when I share
something I keep hidden
it matters if I'm not there
you see what I am within
You see me growing to be
Yet see the little girl inside
And like a father to me
You'll be right by my side.
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Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12624
Posted: December 2, 2002 4:41 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 12:17 PM PST
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