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The way they used to be (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
Happiness will return when I am with you But as for now, I dont know what to do You gave me hope, you gave me strength My smile was always at the widest length. But you left me without a warning And I still remember every minute of the morning I couldn't understand cause I was too young Everyone told me you went on a trip for fun But now I realize and understand And I want to be with you in that beauiful land Cause I'm so scared here on earth And I question my life, what is it worth Tell me what to do so I can see Exactly how to get things back to the way they used to be

Up the ladder: Like a Father
Down the ladder: Sense of drpression

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12625
Posted: December 6, 2002 6:17 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 6:17 PM PST
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Comments:
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.123 | 6-Dec-02/9:59 PM | Reply
Pimple poem deluxe.
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.42 | 8-Dec-02/2:26 PM | Reply
with a side of cellulite for colour.
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