poemranker ::The way they used to be by Sugarbbybuttrfly

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The way they used to be

by Sugarbbybuttrfly

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Dec 2002 · 2 comments

Happiness will return when I am with you But as for now, I dont know what to do You gave me hope, you gave me strength My smile was always at the widest length. But you left me without a warning And I still remember every minute of the morning I couldn't understand cause I was too young Everyone told me you went on a trip for fun But now I realize and understand And I want to be with you in that beauiful land Cause I'm so scared here on earth And I question my life, what is it worth Tell me what to do so I can see Exactly how to get things back to the way they used to be

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[0] poetandknowit 6-Dec-02/9:59 PM Reply
Pimple poem deluxe.
[n/a] razorgrin 8-Dec-02/2:26 PM Reply
with a side of cellulite for colour.