Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Do you (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
So I'm sweet and adorable does that mean you care Do you have daydreams of running your fingers through my hair? Do you want to pull me close and kiss me so sweet The kind of kiss that would make my knees weak Tell me the truth about what you feel inside Cuz my feelings are hard to contain and I cannot hide You warm the heart that others have left cold You've broken the barrier and you fit the mold Of what a perfect lover is and how life should be So tell me now Do you wanna be with me

Up the ladder: Music (revision)
Down the ladder: Like a Father

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 11

Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12623
Posted: November 20, 2002 2:28 PM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 2:28 PM PST
View voting details
125 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001