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Hunt <3 (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun
When you speak to me You speak as if I was worth it Worth all the time you take To say these words Most guys don't even bother They all just say "fuck it" and walk away You..you are different Unique and conformed at the same time Yet,you are distant Not close enough for me to reach This breaks me Makes me want to evaporate In the end... I will always love you the most.

Up the ladder: Left, Cold
Down the ladder: Lost Lamb

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6664
Posted: December 6, 2002 11:18 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2002 11:18 PM PST
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[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.123 | 6-Dec-02/11:30 PM | Reply
What does less than 3 mean? Is that like 1 or 2? Oh, I see, it is about sleeping with less than three guys and really wanting to just sleep with one but being secretly afraid of the responsilbilities of commitment? Am I in the neighborhood? This is deep, black head stuff!!!
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun @ 205.188.209.77 > poetandknowit | 6-Dec-02/11:35 PM | Reply
No,not even close.It was supposed to be a heart <3...maybe it got fucked up,o well.
[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Dec-02/6:03 PM | Reply
my father's advice to me was treat them bad they'll love you more, love them more they'll treat you bad. it's sad really, but with the right balance and timing true.e
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