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Free verse № 33854

Lost Lamb

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

oh the sweet days when i believed in Jesus and that if you ate your vegtables and went to church everything would be okay the whole world seemed so much simpler finding a cute top on sale would brighten my whole day now i lie here in my own confusion and anguish wondering if this is the state in which i shall die

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[5] -=SeTTle=- 4-Jan-03/10:29 PM Reply
god, this theme is so fucking tired. If you don't have anything new to say don't say it. CHILDHOOD WAS EASY BUT THIS SUCKS.
[n/a] debased › -=SeTTle=- 9-Jan-03/1:40 PM Reply
actually its about losing faith and the queastion of if i ll ever get it back. but its just so easy to generalize.
[7] blurryphotograph 5-Jan-03/8:08 AM Reply
...sort of agree with the dude above me, but I love the first stanza. And the second for that matter...I'll think about the third for a bit...