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Lost Lamb (Free verse) by debased oh the sweet days when i believed in Jesus
and that if you ate your vegtables
and went to church
everything would be okay
the whole world seemed so much simpler
finding a cute top on sale
would brighten my whole day
now i lie here in my own confusion and anguish
wondering
if this is the state
in which i shall die
Up the ladder:
Hunt <3
Down the ladder:
ny road trip
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Posted: January 4, 2003 10:21 PM PST; Last modified: January 4, 2003 10:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6665 Comments:
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-=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.230
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4-Jan-03/10:29 PM
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god, this theme is so fucking tired. If you don't have anything new to say don't say it. CHILDHOOD WAS EASY BUT THIS SUCKS.
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debased @ 24.43.45.89
> -=SeTTle=-
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9-Jan-03/1:40 PM
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actually its about losing faith and the queastion of if i ll ever get it back. but its just so easy to generalize.
...sort of agree with the dude above me, but I love the first stanza. And the second for that matter...I'll think about the third for a bit...
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