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Lost Lamb (Free verse) by debased

oh the sweet days when i believed in Jesus and that if you ate your vegtables and went to church everything would be okay the whole world seemed so much simpler finding a cute top on sale would brighten my whole day now i lie here in my own confusion and anguish wondering if this is the state in which i shall die

blurryphotograph 5-Jan-03/8:08 AM
...sort of agree with the dude above me, but I love the first stanza. And the second for that matter...I'll think about the third for a bit...




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