Re: Don't Care by LuV_jOhNnY	6-Jan-04/8:02 PM
netwind: Yah I totally agree with you. I don't like it too much either, I put in on here on a whim after i finished writing it. It kinda gets stuck in my head and i was just curious to know what people thought of it. It's very, like, depressed pop, i guess.
Re: you will feel by nentwined	6-Jan-04/8:06 PM
Spiffy! Very dark. kinda wierded me out though
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jan-04/1:44 PM
Kinda confused!
Re: soul searching by fair12	7-Jan-04/1:47 PM
Good, Awesome beginning, but i got kinda lost in the middle some where
Re: i wake up from a dream of my mouth by silvertongueddevil	7-Jan-04/1:48 PM
Very sexual but has a wicked awesome twist at the end
Re: Oh No! by foothangingoutofass	9-Jan-04/9:03 PM
what the heck?
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	9-Jan-04/9:05 PM
Its kinda funny, in a grotesque immature kind of way
Re: Preacher Man by masticatedmess	9-Jan-04/9:06 PM
sick. Masticated(hehehe inside joke with friends, quite dirty one at that)
Re: A song by fatmansinging	9-Jan-04/9:08 PM
WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?!?!?!?!?!
Re: This is Bad by newagepoet2000	9-Jan-04/9:10 PM
You are right, it is bad. At least you warned us.
Re: Thommmn Thrrremmn by fatmansinging	9-Jan-04/9:11 PM
It think it may be good. Ya know its someone reciting poetry with food it their mouth.
Re: Thong Thoo by fatmansinging	9-Jan-04/9:13 PM
are there ant acctual words in there?
Re: This Stinks by smarmyfaurt	9-Jan-04/9:14 PM
funny!
Re: Breakfast by flouredweevle	9-Jan-04/9:14 PM
I'm sorry
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	9-Jan-04/9:17 PM
WHat the hell, why did some people give this a 10. Geeze you people are frickin' crazy
Re: Don't Look At Me! by assisenormus	9-Jan-04/9:18 PM
but is it as big as J-lo's?