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Thong Thoo (Free verse) by fatmansinging
Thum Thum Thla Thla Dthee Dthee Dthee Thum Thum Thum Dthee Outhch Outhch Outhch

Up the ladder: Outhouse
Down the ladder: hah

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7142856
Weighted score: 3.714307
Overall Rank: 13537
Posted: November 15, 2003 4:12 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2003 4:12 PM PST
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Comments:
[1] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 15-Nov-03/4:18 PM | Reply
why you make me read this? huh?

is is kinda catchy though... so, I think that, and the fact it is made up entirely of words that, I figure, are of your own construction - brings it up to a:

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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 15-Nov-03/4:48 PM | Reply
genie us
[3] smlink84 @ 68.98.150.99 | 15-Nov-03/5:01 PM | Reply
Interesting and creative. Atthe same time totally DRUNK
[10] titan69 @ 213.48.75.82 | 16-Nov-03/10:53 AM | Reply
love this one to keep up the good work
[10] titan69 @ 213.48.75.82 | 16-Nov-03/10:54 AM | Reply
kikk lobb tit pppppnurst
[9] capachijim @ 24.168.26.48 | 19-Nov-03/3:22 PM | Reply
syllabyleistic are we?
[0] SILYLILGURL @ 138.88.232.87 | 30-Dec-03/8:55 PM | Reply
ummm ok???
[0] LuV_jOhNnY @ 198.108.232.52 | 9-Jan-04/9:13 PM | Reply
are there ant acctual words in there?
[3] tolstoyleo @ 172.193.58.15 | 30-Jun-04/4:40 AM | Reply
You sound like my friend who has a very bad lisp... and speaking of... why does the word lisp end in "sp?"
I gave it a 3
[8] smellycat541@ @ 24.52.118.112 | 19-Jan-05/11:13 AM | Reply
I love how you named it so everyone will read it.
[n/a] zodiac @ 212.118.11.30 > smellycat541@ | 22-Jan-05/5:09 AM | Reply
I love how the first thing you did on joining the site was go to the worst poems list and comment on how bad all the poems are. No one can object to you that way, right?

Wrong. fatmansinging chose that title simply because it encapsulates the feeling of the rest of his poem, like everybody else does.
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