Re: Butcher by Christof	22-Aug-02/9:26 AM
that's pleasure, not pleaser. I'm the pleaser, well half the time.
Re: Butcher by Christof	22-Aug-02/9:25 AM
May I print this and hang it up in my kitchen? It's has such prettiness to it. Hair giving grip, fat giving way, knife's low wit. I wish I knew how to write. No matter gentlemen like you make it a pleaser just to read 10/10
Re: Gong by tiamat	22-Aug-02/12:04 AM
I'm sure i don't understand this but i like it just the same 8/10
Re: Eahtatiene by 1Sapphire1	21-Aug-02/11:55 PM
your poem suffers from rhymningitis. The only thing to do is put it to sleep, before it kills again
Re: Arts stare by Art Glocken	21-Aug-02/11:46 PM
yuck 0
Re: Adolescence by PoeticDelicacy	21-Aug-02/11:44 PM
great topic badpoem
Re: High? Coo... by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:43 PM
Good 7/10 the title is bizarre
Re: You by Butterflies	21-Aug-02/11:39 PM
Well here's a whole lot of nothing to say.
Re: Evening by unknown	21-Aug-02/11:18 PM
do you read poetry?
Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:13 PM
thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:13 PM
thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:12 PM
thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:12 PM
thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:11 PM
thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
Re: Missing you by kawakurdi	21-Aug-02/7:20 PM
Terrific intil the last line. Feels like daddy was tellling you to hurry, turn off the lights and go to bed. This lovely poem deserves a stronger finish.
Re: Path by Rlee	21-Aug-02/7:18 PM
throw this away and start over. I sense you have something valuable to say, but it's lost amid the self-agrandizing word play. Stick to the idea you're trying to express. Less is mucho mas more.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/6:03 PM
Mr Shin Bojangles your haiku is obscure enough to be unrecognizable. Sorry for using up your space to post my oppinions on the mis-use of the word pussy. So many of the postings seem to be tongue-in-cheek and humorously absurd I thought it would be fun to challenge some of the natives. Again, please forgive. As for you dark angel I am no ones alter ego. The use of the word pussy to discribe someone who is afeminite or cowardly is as absurd as using the word dick to discribe a jerk or an idiot. And yes Virginia the sex organs are MALE and/or FEMALE. Thank you for calling me a silly tart, that's a fun kinda girl to be. But I will have to beat you latter. Why is it that you and all your male comrades can get on board and rave their ravings, but when I do, everyone of you pussies gets your panties up in a scrunchy bunch? If I sing to cyndi lauper at a Karaoke bar wearing a velvet dress can I be a pussy too? Final thought.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/2:49 PM
razorgirlie I am not, have not, and will not ever be a feminist. you are the reason why.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/2:46 PM
to razorthin I am far from boring and i don't need to "lighten up" I have just the right height/weight ratio. penis bearer is not an insult, little penis bearer is. Maybe it's YOU who are taking my comments to seriously perhaps this is my evil attempt at humor.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	21-Aug-02/2:43 PM
D.A. d.a darkangel dumbass; androgynous pussies?! you're an idiot. As for being labeled I am not a feminist or any other kind of ist. I love testosterone! I just bel;ieve in the right to rebuttal