Re: a comment on One Country by poetandknowit	15-Oct-02/9:18 AM
No te mandes la parte, si me entiendes. Why no replies?
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	15-Oct-02/12:08 AM
Poetandknowit, why do you hoard your answers like they're bones? Please write. Real mail would be nice. You own my address, put a stamp on it.
Re: our morning bed by daniella	15-Oct-02/12:05 AM
Please do not disappear. I need you here. The way a mule needs a steady and knowing kick. Love the title
Re: cornered invitation by daniella	14-Oct-02/11:59 PM
You right like a boy on drugs. Good for you, excellent even.
Re: choices unto death by daniella	14-Oct-02/11:55 PM
God good they will. And try on your things while you're still breathing. They surely will. Last line is confusing to me, but what isn't this day.
Re: words our Father by daniella	14-Oct-02/11:52 PM
This is perhaps too personal for me to appreciate. I lose myself towards the middle and continue lost til the end.
Re: simple silence by daniella	14-Oct-02/11:50 PM
perfect. 10
Re: After Halloween by Limness	14-Oct-02/11:47 PM
Stanza 2 is so perfect in it's vocalization. Lovely and sweet. Like hard candy rolled around in my mouth. I am a connoiseur of intelligent sorrow. Birds of a feather and all that. Thank you for the bittersweet treat.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	14-Oct-02/12:50 PM
Your extraordinary gift for rhyme brings me great joy. Your stories are creative, funny and intelligently written. The shit theme is bizarre, but when it's well executed it's impossible complain. I always picture the most wonderful illustration when I read your tales, a la Mr. Gorey. Do you draw?
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	14-Oct-02/8:46 AM
We are good together. Despite the logistics, you have mixed somehow with my blood. You capture my core. We have our affinity. I am grateful to find you here, and in a sweet and strange way, I love you.
Re: Snow-White by vulcan	14-Oct-02/8:19 AM
Well, he''s dressed in sorrow, compares himself to death, and grieves for his soul.
Re: Two Towers by Tascobar	14-Oct-02/8:17 AM
I like this poem's subtlety. It works for me.
Re: Snow-White by vulcan	14-Oct-02/8:11 AM
Overwhelmed by snowmen? Have been raised in So.Cal. I suppose I'm not one to judge really. That's one scary snowman.
Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/8:07 AM
Sorry no. He's a intimate friend, family really. He's my brother.
Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/7:53 AM
let's see, I read this last night while at Horus8's house. I wasn't too impressed. Horus8 seemed to really get it and he loved "roll them in verbage". This poem is goofy to a certain extent. I realize when you say the dead you don't mean the dead, dead, but I can't help picturing corpse in various states of decomposition and me trying to resurrect them. Also the image of an army just feels anti-poet. Poets do not lead armies, as far as I know, can anyone tell me if a poet has ever lead an army? Does Lincoln count
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	14-Oct-02/12:34 AM
"Siempre mientiendo amor" really speaks to my conscience right now. Love is so frgile and dependent on the actors to sustain the illusion. If one decides not to play along anymore, the illusion is broken. I love our back and forth. It is a creative and satisifing business.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	14-Oct-02/12:25 AM
Pero si no calmas los enojos. Me dejas ardiente, y deciendo el olvido. Cuantas veces en una sola vida sabre este dulce estar?
Re: Reptiles & Dust - Part One by Wulf	14-Oct-02/12:01 AM
My favorite of your poems. Many examples of the reach of your creativity. many many beautiful and truthful insights. I don't like the end. My favorite stanzas are 8,9 & 19. I know I will read this again.
Re: Introduction By Decree by Wulf	13-Oct-02/11:50 PM
Is the repetition intentional?
Re: A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	13-Oct-02/10:03 PM
I posted what i thought was a funny and well written commit, but then I submitted it under Horus8. I deleted the comment and now I can't come up with anything clever. I feel bad. I like being funny. I don't want a dead army. I don't understand your metaphor. Tickling the dead sounds gross. I don't want to do it.