Re: a comment on While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Mar-03/3:15 PM
"I like you for you" hahahahahahahahahahahaha......hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! Welcome to MS. ORNELLA'S NEIGHBORHOOD Hi kids, its a wonderful day in the neighborhood! Can you say Co-Dee-Pen-Dent? Sure... I knew you could! Follow me into the kitchen children, be careful, don't slip on that pool of venom I threw-up earlier. Now let's open the drawer and I'll show my collection of daggers. Oh! this one's my favorite kids! It's the one I use for stabbing people in the back. Can you say Change-ling? How about Shape-shifter? Today we're going to take a trip to zoo and visit the Bi-polar bears. Won't that be fun?! They're going to teach use how to vacillate between hospitable & homicidal. Then the witch from Hansel & Gretel will be here to show us how to lure addictive personalities with alchohol and pills. While we're still here in the kitchen, I'd like to show you a recipe from my new cook book; It's a Wonderful Day for A Neighbor. Take one lost soul, baste him in merlot, season with crushed up vicodens. Batter with relentless abuse, fuck him over a hot stove, then drag through burning coals. Repeat. Always remember kiddies, I like you just the way you are. Tits, dick and all!
Re: Threnody by Nanshe	18-Mar-03/2:32 PM
mon amie mon contre ami mon amie mon contre amie How strange. I haven't seen this til now. I feel that if your Therody and my Underseas came to life and met they would wed and give birth to a thousand pisciform children. Slippery ominess children. Then you and I would be forced to go out in our tiny boat, cast our nets, and draw back all our weird abundance before it devoured everything in its path.
Re: a comment on squeeze by kthulah	17-Mar-03/1:11 AM
As you wish.
Re: a comment on squeeze by kthulah	17-Mar-03/1:04 AM
Well bunny, since I have a terrible memory I'm going to have to rely on you in part. There's always, at the very least, two sides to every story; here's mine... Once upon a time there was a Old Hag who happened upon a discussion about pussies. The -=Darkest_Angel-of-All=- used the Sacred Word to define some lowly inhabitant's cowardess, and the Old Witch cackled that she could crack a walnut between her lips and spit out the meat. Meaning it was an unfair and erroneous analogy to compare a weakling to the inequivicable powers of the female genitalia. After that I'm lost. I remember hemaphrodites and some back and forth about peni vs. clitori. I'm old and mentally fatigued. If you have a transcript of this discourse I would appreciate a copy. As I have said, my memory is rotten with age, though my vagina is supple and fully intact. I thank you in advance for your cooperation.
Re: a comment on squeeze by kthulah	16-Mar-03/1:28 PM
Well at least we have one thing in common, foolish girl, you shouldn't assume so much "not to brag" but my vagina is quite a lovely place to visit. I do a minimum of 1,000 kegels daily, though I've never heard it suggested to do them all at once. Personal I do 100 reps. ten-twenty times daily. Recently it's been more like 30x/day, since it's the only excercise my dear little vagina's been getting as of late. I'll try the 1,000 and let you know, I won't get muscle strain will I? So it seems we have at least one thing in common, I'd venture to say it's much more. Have you read the Tao of Sex by Dr. Stephen T. Chang, it's a gracefully written and insightful book. No one I know has read it, or anything like it for that matter, and I would love very much to have someone to talk to about it. I've also taught classes on sexuality for 10 yrs., so though I can't possibly know everything, I know quite a bit. Have you heard of or done the Female Deer Exercise for the suspension of menstraution? I did it 8 yrs. ago, but when I finally got it to work, I became frightened, and stopped. I don't know anyone who has used it and would like some input. I have no problem with your poem, the nature of your vagina, or the vagina as a dynamic part of the body. It's really quite ironic because last August when I started participating on this site I got into my first arguement over this very subject. I was defending my pussy along these very same lines, so I feel thanks to you I have come full circle. Let me apologize for offending you... I'm truly sorry. I only meant to say that I think you're poem could be a little more specific; for example in that last line of you could somehow introduce some of the knowledge or power of your vagina, instead of merely saying 'walls of flesh' that would really be something. Again, I'm sorry I started this off on the wrong foot, I've been going through a rough spot lately and unfortunately I am only human, and full of frailties, one of them being inconsiderate at times, please accept my apology.
Re: a comment on squeeze by kthulah	15-Mar-03/10:46 PM
"Perhaps you expect too much from poetry" hahahahahahahahahahahaha.... that's rich. What a pat and ludcrious excuse for everything. Perhaps you expect to much from a sandwich.. a doctor... a friendship... a blow job. the arguement to keep things direct is a viable one, and I understand what you're saying, it makes sense, but this idea that too much is expected is ridiculous, don't you think? Some poems are good, some are bad, some can be made better. Personally I hate poetry about lofty subjects, I'm not one for sitting around figuring out how many angels fit on the head of a pin, boring as hell and holds no bearing on anything. I still believe 'special' could be replaced with something more personal, without losing any of the raw directness, and walls made of flesh, really...that's just so vulgar it's juvenile.
Re: a comment on squeeze by kthulah	14-Mar-03/11:08 PM
Ahhh, so is poetry. Only instead of helpful, it would be most gooder if it was coherent. Try some super glue. Let's see... you use 'that' twice in the first two lines. If you change the second 'that' to 'the', it would repeat in the second stanza which would add some coherence(your word not mine). 'special' is a word that means absolutely nothing at all, particulary in poetry, what makes it special? That's what you need to tell the reader. Again the unnecessary use of the word 'that' "The sudden 'entrance' of air you gasp" is awkward and needs to be re-phrased. Heaven's vices? How do you take someone to a vice, no matter where it might be located? Den with walls made of flesh. That's just a plainly awful line. The image doesn't seduce, it's actually on the repulsive side. "Den" alone would work, but "with walls of flesh"? Try using an adjective for walls if you must keep it. You are apparently squeezing your partners body part(s) inside some orifice. That's how your 'poem' comes across. More Gray's Anatomy than Erotica.
Re: Pushed Aside by x311	14-Mar-03/9:24 PM
Jesus, how do you people go about writing about images and then never revealing even one? A picture show? What picture show? Stolen spiols? what stolen spoils? Where!? People & places? What people? What places? A postcard from where????????!!!!!!! what the fuck all are you talking about?
Re: To My Grave by Bonehiss	14-Mar-03/9:16 PM
you write these poems strictly for yourself. This is completely inaccessable. Think about the audience. Tell them the story.
Re: Enantiodromia by Bonehiss	14-Mar-03/9:12 PM
Oh me oh my. What is it your trying to say?
Re: squeeze by kthulah	14-Mar-03/8:32 PM
This is the worst kind of bad. Parading around as something good. Sort of like a Bon-Bon filled with cod-liver oil.
Re: a comment on Why I Chose My Name by mmejido	14-Mar-03/8:28 PM
I spy with my little eye, something green & monstorous. Spinning spinning, smoke pouring out of the gear box. Don't worry my sweet potato, there is no precocious star brighter than you.
Re: Scruffles by mmejido	14-Mar-03/7:56 PM
The best thing I've read in weeks. You remind me of -=Dark_Angel=-, without the pretentious wings.
Re: The last day of an old year by poetandknowit	14-Mar-03/3:05 PM
I miss you. Party's End is a direct rip-off, or should I say, was inspired by this fanastic poem. but then I see my "For Monica..." at the end of this piece. The only poem of my mine the tweed-coated Babbitt ever bothered with. Come speak to me. Here I go, begging once again.
Re: sexy by elizabethann	13-Mar-03/10:32 AM
Im not sure 'sexy' isn't your thing. I mean a bald beautiful girl in mens clothing can be pretty down-right sexy. Think about this some more, actually don't think...feel.
Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~>	12-Mar-03/8:24 PM
Nice read. Good strong sounds. I know what dun means, but don't get dun on dun?
Re: Blustered by INTRANSIT	12-Mar-03/3:23 PM
Other than the fact that death is always inevitable, regardless, I like this poem. It says a great deal, but you have to fix 'inevitable'. Great 5 syllable word, by the way.
Re: An Ode to minorties that use Paprika by Shardik	4-Mar-03/7:56 PM
'I dig you Asian dude.....snap on tools'. Is its own poem. Many great images. The mexican hawking roasted maize is important. I shall write one too. .
Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8	4-Mar-03/2:29 PM
Brilliant. 10
Re: a comment on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah	4-Mar-03/12:19 AM
When I'm good, I'm very good, but when I'm bad, I get a substancially bigger tip(no pun intended).