Re: a comment on While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Mar-03/3:15 PM
"I like you for you" hahahahahahahahahahahaha......hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! Welcome to MS. ORNELLA'S NEIGHBORHOOD Hi kids, its a wonderful day in the neighborhood! Can you say Co-Dee-Pen-Dent? Sure... I knew you could! Follow me into the kitchen children, be careful, don't slip on that pool of venom I threw-up earlier. Now let's open the drawer and I'll show my collection of daggers. Oh! this one's my favorite kids! It's the one I use for stabbing people in the back. Can you say Change-ling? How about Shape-shifter? Today we're going to take a trip to zoo and visit the Bi-polar bears. Won't that be fun?! They're going to teach use how to vacillate between hospitable & homicidal. Then the witch from Hansel & Gretel will be here to show us how to lure addictive personalities with alchohol and pills. While we're still here in the kitchen, I'd like to show you a recipe from my new cook book; It's a Wonderful Day for A Neighbor. Take one lost soul, baste him in merlot, season with crushed up vicodens. Batter with relentless abuse, fuck him over a hot stove, then drag through burning coals. Repeat. Always remember kiddies, I like you just the way you are. Tits, dick and all!
Re: Threnody by Nanshe	18-Mar-03/2:32 PM
mon amie mon contre ami mon amie mon contre amie How strange. I haven't seen this til now. I feel that if your Therody and my Underseas came to life and met they would wed and give birth to a thousand pisciform children. Slippery ominess children. Then you and I would be forced to go out in our tiny boat, cast our nets, and draw back all our weird abundance before it devoured everything in its path.
Re: Pushed Aside by x311	14-Mar-03/9:24 PM
Jesus, how do you people go about writing about images and then never revealing even one? A picture show? What picture show? Stolen spiols? what stolen spoils? Where!? People & places? What people? What places? A postcard from where????????!!!!!!! what the fuck all are you talking about?
Re: To My Grave by Bonehiss	14-Mar-03/9:16 PM
you write these poems strictly for yourself. This is completely inaccessable. Think about the audience. Tell them the story.
Re: Enantiodromia by Bonehiss	14-Mar-03/9:12 PM
Oh me oh my. What is it your trying to say?
Re: a comment on Why I Chose My Name by mmejido	14-Mar-03/8:28 PM
I spy with my little eye, something green & monstorous. Spinning spinning, smoke pouring out of the gear box. Don't worry my sweet potato, there is no precocious star brighter than you.
Re: Scruffles by mmejido	14-Mar-03/7:56 PM
The best thing I've read in weeks. You remind me of -=Dark_Angel=-, without the pretentious wings.
Re: The last day of an old year by poetandknowit	14-Mar-03/3:05 PM
I miss you. Party's End is a direct rip-off, or should I say, was inspired by this fanastic poem. but then I see my "For Monica..." at the end of this piece. The only poem of my mine the tweed-coated Babbitt ever bothered with. Come speak to me. Here I go, begging once again.
Re: sexy by elizabethann	13-Mar-03/10:32 AM
Im not sure 'sexy' isn't your thing. I mean a bald beautiful girl in mens clothing can be pretty down-right sexy. Think about this some more, actually don't think...feel.
Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~>	12-Mar-03/8:24 PM
Nice read. Good strong sounds. I know what dun means, but don't get dun on dun?
Re: Blustered by INTRANSIT	12-Mar-03/3:23 PM
Other than the fact that death is always inevitable, regardless, I like this poem. It says a great deal, but you have to fix 'inevitable'. Great 5 syllable word, by the way.
Re: An Ode to minorties that use Paprika by Shardik	4-Mar-03/7:56 PM
'I dig you Asian dude.....snap on tools'. Is its own poem. Many great images. The mexican hawking roasted maize is important. I shall write one too. .
Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8	4-Mar-03/2:29 PM
Brilliant. 10
Re: a comment on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah	4-Mar-03/12:19 AM
When I'm good, I'm very good, but when I'm bad, I get a substancially bigger tip(no pun intended).
Re: The Feild In Which I Live by Fear of Garbage	28-Feb-03/10:44 PM
Get rid of 'then'int he last line otherwise perfect. 10
Re: the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub	28-Feb-03/10:38 PM
Where the hell have you been? I suffer through one more trial and no Lucifer to tempt me with his light. Lovely poem. 'Pea coat, stool-pigeon, cracked lips...' This poem is speaking to my twisted-up guts. Last stanza, second line 'punctures this skin' try it, you'll like it.
Re: The Fate of the Gilt by OneFingerAnswer	26-Feb-03/4:35 PM
Isn't "hath" in line 2? The end is better than the beginning. That is my personal flaw. e
Re: Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer	26-Feb-03/4:28 PM
Sometimes the gold gets swallowed, but then it comes out your ass buried undered a pile of crap. This needs to be dug through. 
Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig	25-Feb-03/3:51 PM
You are a funny thing, my bitter-sweet Seraphim. Last night I thought for certain Nanshe was 'a girl' as you put it, I suppose you mean anatomically, but that makes no difference to me. Will you take me for a ride? I know how to ignore the batteries hum. I'll lay back and press my cheek against yours. Pop-A- Wheelie.
Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig	25-Feb-03/3:28 PM
Thank you my sweet, I shall plant this like a magic bean, like a last resort. Let me take this opportunity to say the word Ally ten times. Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally Ally.