Re: Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom	23-Jun-03/8:48 PM
Precisely why I'm bisexual. A summer and winter home. If I could offer you some advice it would be take more risks, and find and mix layerably more stimulating subjects and materials. For example, put tis poem inside of a diner with al of the weird characters that would accompany the diner of your imagination, 100 year old waitress with a tit job. gay tough guy rapist trucker, and so on. think U turn (the movie) then mix in this subtextualesque story of a chick that ignores you piece. capeesh.
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/8:16 PM
Just because you haven't written anything even worth mentioning in months... don't take your writer cramps out on me. I'm trying to work here, if you don't mind Mr. Maturity award with side of funless funyons and a Diet Dr. Pooper.
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/8:06 PM
You are mistaking what all poetry should do for a connection all children at that age have. 85% of children are damaged at that age because of the rapid changes occuring, physically, mentally, and evironmentally. Try it, ask anyone what happened top them betwen the ages of three and 5, and watch carefully.
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/8:00 PM
Wrong, I got it. Granted it's an infomercial for a spinning hairbrush with a plug that weighs about 15 lbs, but 2 grand is rent man, and it's only a day of work. Also, not getting jobs is as much a part of the learning process, as say when they hoist you up to check for bed sores and candy wrappers. It's all part of the process, which I accepted a long long time ago
Re: a comment on Donning an Ass Mask by horus8	23-Jun-03/6:30 AM
It's fear of clowns.
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/6:19 AM
Do you know the story of the original Gordian knot and Alexander the great?
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/6:16 AM
Here, here.
Re: a comment on A Gordian knot (Some dirt on a friend of mine) by Bachus	23-Jun-03/6:13 AM
No, but I can see my coffee maker, and that's about as metaphorical as it gets right now.
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/6:04 AM
Your stance here? Amazing, simply finger gag me to death regalishly amazing. You my friend have just overdosed on plaid and wool socks. Because I can feel it, your absolute indifference to you pretending you're absolutely indifferent through sheer fact verses fiction being in what you positively know to be your total and complete control. I wonder who's more emotionally obliterated me, you, or Supremely head in the clouds? Not that it makes a widdled coaster of a difference anymore since I've been inducted into the "Stall of none came" I can die knowing i was better at being a booty than a sock on the foot of a Leper named Afrony Oopsthatsmyear. i've led a privalidged millenium, how you feeling? Your metaphysical mask bit, spurned me to write Donning an Ass-Mask, is it safe. A retrospective of better times to be, enjoy the day aye.
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/5:41 AM
Ding ding! lol.
Re: a comment on OM by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-03/3:45 AM
You would be too, if they paid you for it, like how they pay him. Horus8, is a figment of some poor lost child’s mind on the plane of say Peter Pan. A defense mechanism gone horribly out of control. He doesn't sleep, doesn't eat. Rests fully clothed sitting or standing. Is fearless, godless, and undeniably psychic. A soul so old you can't shake it from your mind for days, weeks, sometimes forever. That one mutated gene that Darwin slept on for a lifetime. I've seen him enter a room and within 30 seconds be able to break the entire environment down into, I don't know, programs, formulas, codes of operating the room that he's developed to survive and entertain himself, even down to what spots are better to sit and stand in. Who to trust, who's dangerous, who he could love, who would love him, who's in control, who's not, what might happen if scenarios. I've seen him spontaneously bite people, blatantly imitate them to themselves, seduce, connect, humiliate, expose, enchant, hypnotize. Horus8 is strikingly scary at times, and other times the ultimate companion in everything. Once, I asked him how he did it (poet, father, teacher, writer, comedian, prostitute, drug addict, alcoholic, actor, singer, painter, sculptor, anthropologist, psychologist, historian, collector, director, producer, giver, taker, dreamer, elitist, Mason at the 33 degree) He stared at the wall as if he missed the question, then about two minutes later, out of no where, he says that he'd forgotten, there was a beat and then we just cracked the fuck up, but I've heard different rumors. Here's a short quick list I've compiled from memory. You will find the rest of this comment posted as a recent under the title "Gordian knot" enjoy.
Re: Belongings by Christof	23-Jun-03/12:00 AM
Absolutely poetry at it's best
Re: The irony of the dark continent by zzinnia66	19-Jun-03/1:25 PM
Sorry to hear that.
Re: Pistolero by Wulf	18-Jun-03/5:49 PM
Hmmmm. A powerful piece. Could use a comma more in a couple of spots, but since i'm a leo, I'll over look it, and give you a well earned 10!
Re: a comment on Full another terrific love ballad by John K.Y. by Bachus	18-Jun-03/5:01 PM
I have an idea, post another one, this parodying stuff is fun.
Re: a comment on Full another terrific love ballad by John K.Y. by Bachus	18-Jun-03/4:58 PM
If you indeed write for yourself, you're doing yourself a severe disservice, only a fool would put his name on those pitiful verses.
Re: Irony by poetofthestar	18-Jun-03/4:50 PM
"My Friends Margaret- Hey gurl! Fun fun fun!!! Thank you for Prom. You know what I mean. YAY!!!! lol sorry... hyper. lol. ok love ya! your forever my sister... whether you like it or not!! lol. Cody- Hey, we need to talk soon. you are an awesome guy. possiably the sweetest and most awesome dude I know. I love talking to you and you give the best advice of anyone I kno. if you ever need any help with anything just ask. lylab forever. Sean- I never get to talk to you anymore. I miss you :-( Love you! Nicole- Girlie!!! He's So not worht it. lol. We are over him totaly and completley. Jerk off. Oh, well. lol. love ya like a sis. William- You were amazing in the play. I loved it. It was hillarious. Love ya like a bro. Billy- Hey babe! I can't wait! Meg said I can go!!! :-D Ashley- I swear ive put you up here before! Geocities must hate you or something. lol sorry but your up now. unless the page doesnt save. then your not. lol. did you find the evil pencil? lol. lylas! Casey- You are amazing. Keep writing hun. Never stop writing. AJ- ... yah. ok. lol. debating wit you is a lot of fun. your a great person. your too tall!!! lol. o and i can finaly do that thing from small group! lol. i can use both legs now! yay. Greg- Hey hunny, you are great. Great job in the play. lylab." I don't blame you.
Re: a comment on Full another terrific love ballad by John K.Y. by Bachus	18-Jun-03/4:01 PM
Mp3.com god'sofmusic.com kissofthespiderwoman.com girlonfire.com gangbox.com writing two movies auditions son's soccer games cooking dinner compulsivecleaning smoking fatties composing relaxing shopping designing websites and helping other artists (just not you) because you assume, and don't ask ECV clampouts performing recording painting poetry producing but most of all telling storys wanna hear one about you?
Re: a comment on Full another terrific love ballad by John K.Y. by Bachus	18-Jun-03/3:56 PM
If it doesn't hurt, why are you on my poem pretending you don't care. You would have moved on hours ago.
Re: a comment on Full another terrific love ballad by John K.Y. by Bachus	18-Jun-03/3:52 PM
Yes, I must record my music from my magical chair of everywhere. That's where I perform too. Do you know what a lap top is, Corky? When one travels alot, one writes, and one reviews music and poetry from abroad. Planes & Busses get boring. Perhaps I should go play smell the fart with my drummer? Instead of beating up shit song writers that can't play or write music then. As a freelance writer, actor, father, frontman, and published poet, Corky, my life is more rewarding then you could ever imagine, only because you have no pulse on your imagination whatsoever Corky, I know, I've read everything you've ever written three times Johny boy, because well, it just amazes me that you're for real and not actually making fun of the song writing process. You actually really write shit fucking songs trying not too. It's fucking amazing I can't get enough of it. It's like watching someone shit on a front lawn while sleep walking. It just boggles the fucking mind. And still somehow, you don't get it! Fucking aye, get it over with, buy a fucking guitar or shoot yourself, but either way, get over it, your songs are terrible, and barely worth a wipe across one's bum while camping. I'm sorry, but that's a fact. I won't lie to you, like your peers because I could give a fuck less, but you should really try another approach, this ones not working son.