Re: The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	3-Sep-03/4:20 PM
Angel, Fair enough, but while you're on your soap box painting with your broad brush, why don't you compose something about lovely Muslims who fly jets into skyscrapers, strap bombs to themselves to kill and maim the innocent, and preach that those who do not accept Alah as the one and only God are infidels worthy of death. I mean at least us Christians are willing to allow God to do his work in the after-life...these nuts want to blow up the world so they can lay thier dirty hands on some untapped pussy! I'll tell ya, between you me and the wall.. I don't think there are 72 virgins in all of the western hemisphere! So get to it with those little hands and bang out a draft... I eagerly await your crafty work. -5-
Re: The Last Day Of Christ by Mr Pig	3-Sep-03/4:00 PM
Mr. Pig, I really like your work and have much respect for your opinions. This piece is sharp and descriptive but did leave me with some questions (perhaps I look for more than you intend to reveal). In your eyes is the carpenter on the cross a mere mortal or God incarnate? Is Judas' suicide self-driven or the product God's wrath? P.S. I want to thank you for your kind words, encouragement and well deserved kick in the ass. You were absolutely on the mark in advising me not to abandon this site. Thanks....Joe
Re: A Surgeons Butchery by SupremeDreamer	22-Aug-03/8:21 AM
Dreamster, This work captures the essence of a cold and calculating killer. Your use of surgeon as killer brings this point home quite well and I did get a feel for the terror of it all. However, I have seen you bring words together in a more fluid and tastey fashion. Not your best but still good. P.S. I gave serious thought to your last message to me regarding the need to open up and just let it out. You were right. On the way to work this morning while in the midst of a traffic jam (i'm in New York City) I came up with something that I posted earlier this morning. Take a look see and let me know what you think. Joe.
Re: a comment on How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer	21-Aug-03/4:44 AM
I think you're right about my obsession with the "profound". It's a point well taken. But I do think this work makes a significant point about our society's values and norms and our perception of what constitutes happiness and security. Yes it is a relatively simple point but the simple and the profound are not mutually exclusive. In fact the way I see things, the most profound things in our world are, almost without exception, quite simple. I see in your work a continued impulse to expose many the facads and hypocrocies that surround our society. Maybe I'm reading your words too deeply and putting my own spin on them. That's just the way I see it.
Re: a comment on Trailer Park: Diary of a Hayseed by DreamerSupreme	21-Aug-03/4:29 AM
Dreamster, Now you're talking a language I can understand. Much of what you say is absolutely true! For the record, I do not see myself as some fatherly figure. There is a relationship between age and wisdom. But I've met plenty of older people who are the biggest morons in the world and some younger people who are wise far beyond their years. When I was younger I took a hard ass view of the world and wanted to fight everyone. I see the world in a different light now. I really think life is aobut being the best possible person you can be and helping as many people as you can. I do alot of work with young people in the field of athletics and enjoy the hell out of their company. I learn something new from them EVERY DAY. I hope they're learning from me also. I'm not saying my way is the right way. I'm just sharing with you my view of things so you can better understand where I'm coming from. I'm not patronizing you or talking down to you. I respect or talents and now see that you are an extremely insightful kid. Thanks for your comments.
Re: How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer	21-Aug-03/4:02 AM
Yo Dreamster, This is really nice work. I'm not sure I'd classify it as poetry but it had all the elements of a well thought out, mature, and meaningful story. I think the perspective offered in this piece is on the money and PROFOUND. Good work. -9-
Re: a comment on Trailer Park: Diary of a Hayseed by DreamerSupreme	20-Aug-03/6:20 PM
It's the fucking jungle because that's what you have chosen to make it. There are people on this website who get their points across quite professionally and efectively without being childish and offensive.... Z and Mr. Pig are prime examples of what I'm talking about. I'm really trying not to fucking prosteltize here. We've been there before and you were rightfully offended by that. But let's be fucking real. What I'm talking about is so basic and fundimental. If you don't like a piece of work come out and say so in a constructive way. I don't know what your fucking E-Zboard work shop is all about but it doesn't sound like what I'm talking about. I'm talking about being brutally honest and constructive while being respectful of other peoples efforts and feelings. There are ways of getting your feelings across without being offensive. Why is that so difficult for you to understand? Take a good look at your work. My man, you need a shit load of work on your game. Even I can see that. What the hell am I doing for you and what am I saying about myself if I tell you that your work sucks, you're a fucking asshole, and that your mother has donkey and gorilla cum ooozing from her pussy. It's offensive and infintile. Anyone whose got the courage to throw their work out here for their peers to criticize, deserves to be treated respectfully. When I was younger I was a relatively successful boxer. There was a respect among fighters because we all realized that everytime anyone of us stepped into the ring we were risking our lives. Skill level was unimportant. What we're doing here in this site is not much different than that. Grow the fuck up (there I go talking down to you..sorry)! Like I said, if you want to have a mature relationship I'm game. If you want to be one of the monkey's in the jungle go find another patch of trees to play in..... Joe-joes not playing with the monkeys anymore.
Re: a comment on Trailer Park: Diary of a Hayseed by DreamerSupreme	20-Aug-03/2:33 PM
What can I say, we both suck! Hey Dreamster, lets end this silliness and agree to either not comment on eachothers work or offer only constructive criticism.... no matter how blunt and to the point it may be. If you dont like what I do lay it on me but be constructive. I'm here to work at becoming a better writer as I'm sure you are. i must admit, the verbal sparring is fun but it does get old quickly. I'm a well intentioned guy and you're a good kid. Bright too. So how about it. Let's shake hands and start a new relationship. Wadda ya think? Joe.
Re: Trailer Park: Diary of a Hayseed by DreamerSupreme	20-Aug-03/8:30 AM
Ah bong water overdose that's definetely it. "over the trailor park scence of my life"... sure sign of BW overose..seen it a million times. Take two asprin and suck down a bottle of Lea and Perins Worchestiere sauce (got that in your Egyptian Market? it's right next to the embombing fluid)and you'll feel much better in the morning. -3- Happy 18th birthday! Joe.
Re: First Love by Mr Pig	20-Aug-03/7:24 AM
Mr Pig, You be da man! Smooth like silk baby! Again, your work is mature, tastey, and meaningful!! Joe.
Re: Stargazing Illusionist by DreamerSupreme	20-Aug-03/5:25 AM
Got a bad batch of shrooms huh? Stick with the purple microdot or windowpane...more reliable stuff..know what I mean?
Re: The Grave (thanks to z) by Mr Pig	20-Aug-03/3:56 AM
Mr. Pig, Really nice work. There is some good work on this site but many times I am left untouched by pieces that are well crafted but without real meaning. This work hit home in a powerful way. I really enjoyed reading it. Joe. P.S As usual, I think Z was right on the mark with her comments. She's a serious and classy lady isn't she?
Re: a comment on Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme	11-Aug-03/4:56 AM
I still love ya dreamster. Peace
Re: a comment on Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme	10-Aug-03/5:53 AM
Oh what a profound inditement against the "social prison" of the corporate workplace where the "robots" carry out the orders of their opressors....bla bla bla. How creative....how profound!! In your next work please provide us all with enlightning news about the military industrial complex! Infintile....-6-
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme	7-Aug-03/1:38 PM
Yo Dreamer, Listen I have to go to work.. That's right I have a job. Can't relate to that huh. You've been alot of fun. I really enjoyed it. You're actually a pretty bright kid....but so imature and so confused about life. You really should consider getting some help. When you grow up I'd be more than happy to help you out. I can kind of relate to where you are. For the record I did not threaten you with physical harm. I am a peaceful man who, in my younger days did enjoy kicking ass...and did it quite well. But that's long gone from my system. I was just pointing out that you need to be very careful about how you approach people and the words that you use. I hope you're not stupid enough to talk face to face the way you do here on the net. I know that you're a fucking idiot but I do think you understand the concept of self-preservation. I'm sure you're really just a obnoxious coward.. so you;ll be ok. Like I said. I wish you the best of luck and hope that peace finds its way to you. You can do amazing things with your life if you're properly directed. Peace, Joy and eternal Happiness......Affectionally yours, Yo-yo
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme	7-Aug-03/1:14 PM
Yo Dreamster, I did not give you a zero. I actually thought your work had a bit of wit to it. I really don't mind. I find you amusing. No doubt you're a punk who couldn't stand up face to face with a man like me, but thats OK. We all have to deal with things from a place of comfort. As for me "falling into your trap" I've been around the corner more times than you can count. I'll take this little game as far as I'd like...when I'm no longer amused I'll stop playing. Peace my witty but crude little brother
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme	7-Aug-03/12:50 PM
Yo Dreamster, This is "Yo-yo". I'm really happy you were able to free yourself from all of the stress I've placed on your little tiny shoulders. Here's a little advice your feable mind might be able to understand...if you don't like what I write don't read it you fucking asshole. Peace.
Re: a comment on When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy	1-Aug-03/4:25 AM
You and Buchas would sure make a great couple..two low-class, frustrated souls who are not capable of intelligent expression. Why don't you guys get together and you can do eachother till the cows come home!
Re: a comment on When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy	1-Aug-03/4:10 AM
Yo Bachus, You're all class chump...low class. Why so vulgarly attack a figure you know is worshiped by so many? Who are you looking to hurt and why do you want to hurt them? Your comments are pointless, immature and mean-spiritied. Yo chump, you're not evil....people who are evil are cunning and show some smarts...something you're obviously short on. I'll tell ya what cracks me up about people like you; you won't hesitate to disrespect and denegrate the beliefs of others but I'm quite sure there are a set of beliefs that you cling to that you're quite protective of. Yo chump... have a great day and be careful not to slip on you own bullshit!!