Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z	5-Aug-02/11:02 AM
re: DA. :rofl: You're right, Prince Arthas really is a dweeb. But I do like my death coil. as for this poem... hmm. weird. sorry, can't say much else.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Aug-02/2:06 PM
Umm. I'm looking for a job... this was the best place I could think of to show off "my mad 'l33t skillz".
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Aug-02/5:25 PM
ooh, good call. I'll fix that. =) easy fix. responding to: ------------- Hey, something's broke: I edited a poem, eliminating all the current votes displayed, but on the 'your poems' page, it still shows the previously existing vote count and average. Erk.
Re: Quincy Eye by albellisimo	8-Aug-02/11:54 PM
whafu?
Re: kauri by itchiwitch	8-Aug-02/11:56 PM
Hmm. kauri sounds like it could be a tree. I don't know what else it would be, but from this it sounds very treelike. which makes the haiku essentially pointless. so I'll presume it's not a tree...? ... google search. nope, it's a tree. maybe I'm missing something else?
Re: The Seasons, Changes by Frass	8-Aug-02/11:57 PM
I think I like what you're trying to say, but I'm not sure exactly what it is (if anything). ... ... too confusing.
Re: Hands. by LucidRevelation	9-Aug-02/12:06 AM
that's some intense child porn you've got there. fairly well written, but... is that really what you were going for?
Re: Pi by feelinglistless	10-Aug-02/12:32 PM
hm.. I want a little more out of this story (story; I don't see any poem about this other than the linebreaks every couple of words).
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/7:04 PM
the one thing I don't get... where's your other 'e' in poem? I thought that was a trademark thing... I really don't know how to vote on this piece. It did what it was intending to do very well. And for that it gets high marks. But I can't say I like what it was trying to do (which is the whole point). So!? ... ? Eh. 9. It's brilliant in context. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Aug-02/7:04 PM
eh.
Re: Fire (a haiku series) by eviltwin	11-Aug-02/7:06 PM
I like the progression. I think historically haiku were supposed to be twinned with renga's to do something like this. (or something like that -- what do I know? :) I do like this.
Re: Untitled by Piano	11-Aug-02/7:07 PM
cute. can't say as I liked it, but cute.
Re: ghost of one by crin	11-Aug-02/7:08 PM
one is always dying unless they're dead.
Re: Sophisticant by Bluesee	11-Aug-02/7:10 PM
The words really feel like they were pounded to fit the rhmye and meter you wanted; very awkward to read.
Re: drowning in the bookstore by yarlgrenn	12-Aug-02/6:14 PM
interesting. I... almost like it. I might if I were in a different mood. It seems sloppily well done.
Re: good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit	12-Aug-02/8:30 PM
good surrealism.
Re: Untitled 2 by nightii	12-Aug-02/8:31 PM
very well put; sure, it's the same old same old, but I don't think I've seen it so concisely formed.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Aug-02/2:21 AM
I'm really having trouble putting the images together. got the first one. got the second. don't get the third tying in, really. maybe if I knew the latin? record makes death? hmm. now I'm curious enough to look it up. :) recollection workman death. something like. hmm. ooh -- the workman died but comes back to life to turn off the lathe? sorry, really too obscure for me.