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Pi (Free verse) by feelinglistless
He smiles tightly.
There is a vapour
in the air which
scares him.
It permeates his
orifices, making
him both nervous
and aroused.
Reaching out,
his hand strokes
across the back
of the model Buddha,
his fingertips following
a fault in the wood.
A woman with magenta
hair approaches him.
Her eyes look past him
in a glazed indifference.
?Interested??
There is little thought
behind the words.
This is the
hundredth time
she?d asked it today.
?Lost my religion ...?
he says, remembering
his music injury.
He hands her the list.
?Recognise any??
Her eyes show a slight
interest in the paper
She?s failed a
papyrus course
at University.
This seems
quite ancient.
The words mean little.
?Not in this life ...?
Her voice is shallow,
without feeling.
?Thanks.? He says
leaving the shop,
taking a
final lung
of jostic.
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Posted: May 10, 2002 12:50 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 12:50 PM PDT
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